Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thanks of the lighthearted post. I never have seen creatures do these odd things, but I enjoyed your imagining them plus the clever , parallel illustration. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 30-May-2017

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reply by the author on 31-May-2017

Thanks for reading. I also thought the picture was cute.

Comment from Bucketlist

Excellent

You gotta get a life! A very amusing nonsense poem ( would make a child laugh) I liked the choice and paring of the animals......... the color of background goes well with that picture
Trisha

 Comment Written 28-May-2017

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reply by the author on 28-May-2017

Thanks, Trisha. I'm glad you liked it.

reply by Bucketlist on 28-May-2017

You are welcome

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

Charming, whimsical, perfect for a child's bedtime sorry. The playful question "have you ever" is well-met by the response, "I have" with the confidence of a seasoned storyteller.

 Comment Written 27-May-2017

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reply by the author on 28-May-2017

Thanks for reading.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Not me.
Give me a good Stephen King novel or the latest horror fright flick and I'm in hog heaven...at least for awhile.
Cute poem, and it would seem to me that it clearly falls under the category of nonsense.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean

 Comment Written 27-May-2017

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reply by the author on 28-May-2017

I know Dean. You're definitely a Stephen King kind of guy. ;)
I'm more puppies and fairies myself...
Thanks for reading.

Comment from MaggieF

Excellent

Love the picture and I love the nonsensical poem. It made perfect sense to me, ha ha. Repeating 'I have...' works well. The poem flowed well and told a lovely story. MaggieF

 Comment Written 27-May-2017

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reply by the author on 27-May-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Maggie.