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Manchester (naani)

We can't afford to make this the new normal.

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Comment from ronnie k
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Wonderful write with an exceptional message, this message of innocents, victims spook clearly. Thank you for sharing, someone must hear. Victims give cautious warning for those of us that listen.

 Comment Written 25-May-2017


reply by the author on 25-May-2017
    Thanks for reviewing.Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Lindagail Hall
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Very deep profound write which make us pause for thought . Having lived in Manchester for my childhood to aged eighteen, I know the mind set of manculians which is a name given to those born in the North.. Though you use very few words you managed to fill the pages. I too pray that the world learns something from the Manchester bombings never to happen again.

 Comment Written 25-May-2017


reply by the author on 25-May-2017
    Thanks for reviewing. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Dean Kuch
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No, we cannot afford to do that at all, DALLAS.
There is very little that IS normal about Muslin extremists.
They grow up into an environment of hatred and intolerance for anyone or anything that is different from their own beliefs.
If I were about thirty years younger, I would pack my gear, reenlist in the Marine Corp (if they were taking prior service), hone the skills I learned as an MOS 8541, now 0317, sniper, deploy, then use my Barrett .50 cal rifle to put a bullet between as many of their eyes and through their skulls as humanly possible.
Their lives are less significant to me than an old sick, flea-bitten dog.
And what do we do with sick dogs, you ask?
We put them down and out of their misery.
May God comfort the families of the lost and wounded.
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 Comment Written 25-May-2017


reply by the author on 25-May-2017
    Thanks for reviewing, Dean.
reply by Dean Kuch on 25-May-2017
    My pleasure.
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Yes, 'link the lessons.' I wonder if it is possible to make any headway on the problem. The terrorists continue to think of new ways to get around the security we have in place. It is becoming more and more dangerous every where we go. Thank you for sharing this poem. Your presentation was perfect - it reflects how many of us feel,
~patty~

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 Comment Written 25-May-2017


reply by the author on 25-May-2017
    Thanks for the kind review.