Comment from angel123

Exceptional

Your poem is profound, well-written and well-received. Your artwork choice is excellent and it goes well with your thoughts. Your poem flows well with depth and meaning. Best wishes!

angel123

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017

thank you for the great review.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

This is an excellent poem about a terrible tragedy. What kind of animal could do something like this in the name of their god?

 Comment Written 25-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

The new normal as your description box states is frightening. This cannot be it. We must find a way to end it; yet, there is so much talk & little progress in that area. Your poem reflects how many feel about the Manchester murders. Thanks for sharing & caring. Jan

 Comment Written 25-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017

Thanks for the great review.

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

What a creative way to express the unplanned death of so many young people:
Innocents penned a plea/ in blood prematurely spilled
Excellent choice of words for alliteration of p and L.

 Comment Written 25-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017

Thanks for the great review.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I hope we do "link the lessons" and create a better future. I admired your social commentary in this naani and the alliteration to intensify your observations plus the sober artwork. Here's to hope- Joan

 Comment Written 25-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017

Thanks for the great review. Am really running behind.

reply by Joan E. on 02-Jun-2017

I am finally catching up and you will too! Smiles and happy weekend when it arrives- Joan

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A sad write and a reminder of the sorrow being suffered by the families of this terrible and despicable tragedy, the question on everyone's lips is: Why? Your write is poignant and resonating, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Mai Mai

Excellent

This is a very interesting piece. It seems to link dueling ideas while leaning towards possible war. Good job and good luck.

Mai Mai

 Comment Written 25-May-2017

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reply by the author on 25-May-2017

Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Naani about the real devastating terror attack on young teenagers and children. It is really sad and not how our lives should be lived in fear for an attack when we leave our homes.

 Comment Written 25-May-2017

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reply by the author on 25-May-2017

Thanks for reviewing.T

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

There's nothing normal about this Dallas. Our world leaders are dropping the ball when it comes to terrorists and the random bombings. God bless the victims and their families. Nancy

 Comment Written 25-May-2017

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reply by the author on 25-May-2017

Thanks for reviewing, Nancy.

Comment from Nikki-Nicole

Excellent

After reading this, I find that it is a good poem.
It consists of four lines.
Nice artwork: The image shown supports the poem. The background color goes well with the art and the color of font chosen.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 25-May-2017

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reply by the author on 25-May-2017

Thanks for the kind review.