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My Book of Poems 2010-2017

Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Lovin' from Howie"
a collection of my poetry

50 total reviews 
Comment from MaggieF
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Sweet wee dog, There is nothing like the love of a dog, unconditional devotion, I have three rough collies and although hard work they reward me daily, this poem tells me you don't take his affection for granted. MaggieF

 Comment Written 26-May-2017


reply by the author on 26-May-2017
    Hi Maggie; thank you so much for reading this little poem about Howie. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing about your dogs; I love collies!
    ~patty~
Comment from XGoneX
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Hi,
Such a cute dog. I had one dog that was very similar, but grey. She used to sleep in my ed and follow me everywhere, too. She died years ago.
Flow of words is good and syllable count intended is correct.

 Comment Written 26-May-2017


reply by the author on 26-May-2017
    Hi there; thank you for reading this little poem about Howie. I'm sorry to hear about your dog - losing a pet is one of the hardest things there is.
    I appreciate your warm words of encouragement,
    ~patty~
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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"Lovin' from Howie" is an extremely well-written and heart-warming piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look to reading your next post.

 Comment Written 26-May-2017


reply by the author on 26-May-2017
    Thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed the little poem and I love knowing you are looking forward to my next story or poem,
    ~patty~
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 26-May-2017
    ~patty~you're more than welcome.

    Best wishes, the Duchesss
Comment from Asem.inspirations
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Hello Patty, it's great to see Howie. He looks so loyal and cuddly. I was just reading your profile information, congratulations on your contract for ten of your pet stories. This is great news and it could not have happened to a better person. You deserve this recognition and payment.

This is a great 5 - 7 - 5 piece. I just love the animals...

 Comment Written 26-May-2017


reply by the author on 26-May-2017
    Hi Tier; thank you so much for reading this little poem about Howie. He is a great dog and one of my constant companions.

    Thank you for your congratulations. I have the bulk of the stories ready; I have printed and digital copies and my meeting is at ten o'clock this morning. The sale has already been made, but I get the check today. Dinner out tonight!

    Thanks for reading and following my journey,

    ~patty~
Comment from MelB
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Hi Patty, this is a very nice 5-7-5 on your dog, Howie. Excellent syllable count noted. Our pets do show us unconditional love and are great buddies.

 Comment Written 25-May-2017


reply by the author on 26-May-2017
    Hi Mel; thank you so much for your thoughtful review on my little poem about Howie. I appreciate your time and kind words,
    ~patty~
reply by MelB on 26-May-2017
    You're most welcome.
Comment from Leena
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So Howie, as attractive as Leo! As usual a lovely poem. Short and sweet. Pets' love I guess is sometimes more dependable than human love. Pets are family.

 Comment Written 25-May-2017


reply by the author on 26-May-2017
    Hi again; thank you for this lovely review of my poem about Howie. Pet love is definitely more dependable than human love AND they rarely even think about leaving you,
    ~patty~
Comment from mountainwriter49
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I enjoyed reading your 575 poem this evening. The slant rhyme of buddy/love works well and adds to the quality of the read.
-Ray

 Comment Written 25-May-2017


reply by the author on 26-May-2017
    Hi Ray; thank you so much for the lovely review and your time in reading this piece,
    ~patty~
Comment from Elizabeth Daniels
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It is amazing how dogs will love unconditionally. They can easily lift ones spirits simply by running a cold nose on your ear or licking the back of your hand.Or, in the case of my son's four Siberian huskies, knock you down and maul you with kisses. lol

 Comment Written 25-May-2017


reply by the author on 26-May-2017
    thank you so much for your thoughtful and kind review. It sounds like you son's huskies are a blast. My daughter only has one and she thinks she is a lap dog,
    ~patty~
Comment from kathleenspalding
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Aww, how cute is that? Sweet and enjoyable five - seven - five says it all. Great use of artwork (adorable picture!). Too bad we can't say the same about husbands JUST KIDDING, DEAR! LOL! (Seriously, just kidding.) All the best.

 Comment Written 25-May-2017


reply by the author on 26-May-2017
    LOL! I think the lady doth protest too much! Howie and Bernie are better companions than anyone else in my life - but only because they don't have jobs!
    ~patty~
reply by kathleenspalding on 26-May-2017
    :-D
Comment from Irish Rain
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Oh, and isn't he just a perfect doll-baby!! Looks like peaches and cream, and is undoubtably sweeter!! A lovely 5-7-5 Miss Patty, blessings....

 Comment Written 25-May-2017


reply by the author on 26-May-2017
    Hi Karyn; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed this picture of Howie and the 5-7-5. I love to express my thoughts about my furbabies!
    ~patty~