My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Lovin' from Howie"a collection of my poetry
50 total reviews
Comment from MaggieF
Sweet wee dog, There is nothing like the love of a dog, unconditional devotion, I have three rough collies and although hard work they reward me daily, this poem tells me you don't take his affection for granted. MaggieF
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
Sweet wee dog, There is nothing like the love of a dog, unconditional devotion, I have three rough collies and although hard work they reward me daily, this poem tells me you don't take his affection for granted. MaggieF
Comment Written 26-May-2017
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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Hi Maggie; thank you so much for reading this little poem about Howie. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing about your dogs; I love collies!
~patty~
Comment from XGoneX
Hi,
Such a cute dog. I had one dog that was very similar, but grey. She used to sleep in my ed and follow me everywhere, too. She died years ago.
Flow of words is good and syllable count intended is correct.
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
Hi,
Such a cute dog. I had one dog that was very similar, but grey. She used to sleep in my ed and follow me everywhere, too. She died years ago.
Flow of words is good and syllable count intended is correct.
Comment Written 26-May-2017
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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Hi there; thank you for reading this little poem about Howie. I'm sorry to hear about your dog - losing a pet is one of the hardest things there is.
I appreciate your warm words of encouragement,
~patty~
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Lovin' from Howie" is an extremely well-written and heart-warming piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look to reading your next post.
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
"Lovin' from Howie" is an extremely well-written and heart-warming piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look to reading your next post.
Comment Written 26-May-2017
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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Thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed the little poem and I love knowing you are looking forward to my next story or poem,
~patty~
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~patty~you're more than welcome.
Best wishes, the Duchesss
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Hello Patty, it's great to see Howie. He looks so loyal and cuddly. I was just reading your profile information, congratulations on your contract for ten of your pet stories. This is great news and it could not have happened to a better person. You deserve this recognition and payment.
This is a great 5 - 7 - 5 piece. I just love the animals...
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
Hello Patty, it's great to see Howie. He looks so loyal and cuddly. I was just reading your profile information, congratulations on your contract for ten of your pet stories. This is great news and it could not have happened to a better person. You deserve this recognition and payment.
This is a great 5 - 7 - 5 piece. I just love the animals...
Comment Written 26-May-2017
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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Hi Tier; thank you so much for reading this little poem about Howie. He is a great dog and one of my constant companions.
Thank you for your congratulations. I have the bulk of the stories ready; I have printed and digital copies and my meeting is at ten o'clock this morning. The sale has already been made, but I get the check today. Dinner out tonight!
Thanks for reading and following my journey,
~patty~
Comment from MelB
Hi Patty, this is a very nice 5-7-5 on your dog, Howie. Excellent syllable count noted. Our pets do show us unconditional love and are great buddies.
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
Hi Patty, this is a very nice 5-7-5 on your dog, Howie. Excellent syllable count noted. Our pets do show us unconditional love and are great buddies.
Comment Written 25-May-2017
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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Hi Mel; thank you so much for your thoughtful review on my little poem about Howie. I appreciate your time and kind words,
~patty~
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You're most welcome.
Comment from Leena
So Howie, as attractive as Leo! As usual a lovely poem. Short and sweet. Pets' love I guess is sometimes more dependable than human love. Pets are family.
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
So Howie, as attractive as Leo! As usual a lovely poem. Short and sweet. Pets' love I guess is sometimes more dependable than human love. Pets are family.
Comment Written 25-May-2017
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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Hi again; thank you for this lovely review of my poem about Howie. Pet love is definitely more dependable than human love AND they rarely even think about leaving you,
~patty~
Comment from mountainwriter49
I enjoyed reading your 575 poem this evening. The slant rhyme of buddy/love works well and adds to the quality of the read.
-Ray
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
I enjoyed reading your 575 poem this evening. The slant rhyme of buddy/love works well and adds to the quality of the read.
-Ray
Comment Written 25-May-2017
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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Hi Ray; thank you so much for the lovely review and your time in reading this piece,
~patty~
Comment from Elizabeth Daniels
It is amazing how dogs will love unconditionally. They can easily lift ones spirits simply by running a cold nose on your ear or licking the back of your hand.Or, in the case of my son's four Siberian huskies, knock you down and maul you with kisses. lol
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
It is amazing how dogs will love unconditionally. They can easily lift ones spirits simply by running a cold nose on your ear or licking the back of your hand.Or, in the case of my son's four Siberian huskies, knock you down and maul you with kisses. lol
Comment Written 25-May-2017
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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thank you so much for your thoughtful and kind review. It sounds like you son's huskies are a blast. My daughter only has one and she thinks she is a lap dog,
~patty~
Comment from kathleenspalding
Aww, how cute is that? Sweet and enjoyable five - seven - five says it all. Great use of artwork (adorable picture!). Too bad we can't say the same about husbands JUST KIDDING, DEAR! LOL! (Seriously, just kidding.) All the best.
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
Aww, how cute is that? Sweet and enjoyable five - seven - five says it all. Great use of artwork (adorable picture!). Too bad we can't say the same about husbands JUST KIDDING, DEAR! LOL! (Seriously, just kidding.) All the best.
Comment Written 25-May-2017
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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LOL! I think the lady doth protest too much! Howie and Bernie are better companions than anyone else in my life - but only because they don't have jobs!
~patty~
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Comment from Irish Rain
Oh, and isn't he just a perfect doll-baby!! Looks like peaches and cream, and is undoubtably sweeter!! A lovely 5-7-5 Miss Patty, blessings....
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
Oh, and isn't he just a perfect doll-baby!! Looks like peaches and cream, and is undoubtably sweeter!! A lovely 5-7-5 Miss Patty, blessings....
Comment Written 25-May-2017
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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Hi Karyn; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed this picture of Howie and the 5-7-5. I love to express my thoughts about my furbabies!
~patty~