Nancy
...a different kind of story54 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written story of a loving couple's marriage going wrong, when the man hides behind his work schedule and leaves his loving wife alone at home to do whatever she wants. Many women reach out to alcohol to make their empty, lonely lives more bearable.
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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A very well-written story of a loving couple's marriage going wrong, when the man hides behind his work schedule and leaves his loving wife alone at home to do whatever she wants. Many women reach out to alcohol to make their empty, lonely lives more bearable.
Comment Written 24-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Hi Sandra; thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you liked it,
~patty~
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Glad to see something dark and foreboding come out of your penmanship.
Awesome story, and so true to life in many situations, where the lonely women decides to cash in all her chips and swing from the chandeliers.
Resonates well with modern life, don't'cha think?
And, you didn't leave the dogs out altogether. They may not be a major part of the storyline, but they are in there.
Nice one!
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Glad to see something dark and foreboding come out of your penmanship.
Awesome story, and so true to life in many situations, where the lonely women decides to cash in all her chips and swing from the chandeliers.
Resonates well with modern life, don't'cha think?
And, you didn't leave the dogs out altogether. They may not be a major part of the storyline, but they are in there.
Nice one!
Comment Written 24-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Hi Brett; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I thought this might be a needed break from the dog/cat stories. I have been working on them so much this week to get ready for the sale I have coming that I really needed to write something different. I'm glad you enjoyed it,
~patty~
Comment from c_lucas
A relationship that should have decease years ago. This is very well written with an interesting flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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A relationship that should have decease years ago. This is very well written with an interesting flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 24-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Hi; nice to see you again. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your warm comments,
~patty~
Comment from Sankey
Great wrok. very dramatic. And I could feel for the lady in her loneliness. having some of that myself atm with my sweety in Hospital. Just a couple of spag...She had [to] the cleanest.....with a dozen [of] eggs
I have put up one of my smellier poems for a Revive Certificate if interested.
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reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Great wrok. very dramatic. And I could feel for the lady in her loneliness. having some of that myself atm with my sweety in Hospital. Just a couple of spag...She had [to] the cleanest.....with a dozen [of] eggs
I have put up one of my smellier poems for a Revive Certificate if interested.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Hi; thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words and for catching the SPAG. I didn't put the 'of' in dozen of eggs. Another reviewer suggested I start working to take out the 'of' if I can. A dozen eggs works.
~patty~
