haiku (dead bird nestles)
Awaiting street cleaning day or a hungry cat.61 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
Poor wittle birdie.
I wonder if he taw a puddy tat?
I'll bet he DID, he DID taw a puddy tat!
Dat bad ol puddy tat...
Okay. Enough with the tweety bird routine. I'm out of my meds, so it's gonna be a rough night for yours truly.
This isn't a foul depiction of death in haiku poetry in any way.
it's actually well composed.
Best of luck to you!
~Dean
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reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Poor wittle birdie.
I wonder if he taw a puddy tat?
I'll bet he DID, he DID taw a puddy tat!
Dat bad ol puddy tat...
Okay. Enough with the tweety bird routine. I'm out of my meds, so it's gonna be a rough night for yours truly.
This isn't a foul depiction of death in haiku poetry in any way.
it's actually well composed.
Best of luck to you!
~Dean
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Comment Written 24-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Oh, thank you, Dean. Your review of my death haiku cheers me at this odd time of night. Pleasant scream.
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And a very pleasant screams to you as well. :)
