thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Grandmas little angel"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
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Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is a very god poem. I hope you do well. Wait a minute. I entered this contest. I hope you crash and burn. Your entry sucks.
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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This is a very god poem. I hope you do well. Wait a minute. I entered this contest. I hope you crash and burn. Your entry sucks.
Comment Written 24-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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LOL Thank you for your review love the comments,Good luck to you too.
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your short poem " Grandma's little Angel" (I think they call that - out of the mouths of babes). Just one small point. You left off the ' in Grandma's. I don't know if that is important or not.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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I enjoyed reading your short poem " Grandma's little Angel" (I think they call that - out of the mouths of babes). Just one small point. You left off the ' in Grandma's. I don't know if that is important or not.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 24-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Thank you
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You are welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Thal1959
Very nicely composed - given the restrictions on the maximum word count. Reads short, but sweet. Good luck on the contest.
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Very nicely composed - given the restrictions on the maximum word count. Reads short, but sweet. Good luck on the contest.
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Thank you for your review and comment I appreciate it.
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You're welcome.
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Thank you
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
After reading this, I find it to be a good poem.
It consists of three lines that contain a word count: 5-6-4
Total word count: 15
I can clearly see that this poem meets the requirements of the contest. Therefore, I think 'Grandma's Little Angel' would make a good entry.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Short Poem.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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After reading this, I find it to be a good poem.
It consists of three lines that contain a word count: 5-6-4
Total word count: 15
I can clearly see that this poem meets the requirements of the contest. Therefore, I think 'Grandma's Little Angel' would make a good entry.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Short Poem.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Thank you for your review and comment .
Comment from kathleenspalding
How precious is that!?! Lovely poem tells a story and creates a strong, heartwarmed mood using very few words. Excellent poem for the prompt. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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How precious is that!?! Lovely poem tells a story and creates a strong, heartwarmed mood using very few words. Excellent poem for the prompt. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Thank you
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You're welcome. PS just noticed the title (shown here) needs an apostrophe in Grandma's.
Comment from mvbrooks
Very positive poem and would bring both a smile and a tear to most any grandmother.
An editing note-- the first line says "children" and the last says "she."
For consistency of number, might be better to either have:
child/she
children/one
It would be smoother.
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Very positive poem and would bring both a smile and a tear to most any grandmother.
An editing note-- the first line says "children" and the last says "she."
For consistency of number, might be better to either have:
child/she
children/one
It would be smoother.
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Thank you for your review and comments.I appreciate it ,
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine poem and entry for the contest
with the required words and a nice added rhyme
Nothing like grandma or grandpa in children's eyes
Nicely done
Best wishes in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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This is a fine poem and entry for the contest
with the required words and a nice added rhyme
Nothing like grandma or grandpa in children's eyes
Nicely done
Best wishes in the contest
RS
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Thank you for your review and comment I appreciate them.
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your short poem for the contest. Within the lines of your poem you have captured the essence of children at play, along with their desires to be like the people they love.
One suggestion; maybe use a picture and the advanced editor to enhance the font of the piece
~patty~
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reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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thank you for sharing your short poem for the contest. Within the lines of your poem you have captured the essence of children at play, along with their desires to be like the people they love.
One suggestion; maybe use a picture and the advanced editor to enhance the font of the piece
~patty~
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Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Thank you for your review and comments I appreciate it.I did add a picture of my grandchildren thanks for the advice.
Comment from dmt1967
Kids tend to mimic their elders. They like to act grown-up and grown- ups want to be kid like again lol. This is a sweet short poem that says so much between the lines. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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Kids tend to mimic their elders. They like to act grown-up and grown- ups want to be kid like again lol. This is a sweet short poem that says so much between the lines. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Thank you for your review and comment.I am so glad I get to watch my grand children and play .It is so much fun.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written short poem about the wise comments of a granddaughter that she want to be like grandma when she grows up. A very good compliment from a little girl.
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reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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A very well-written short poem about the wise comments of a granddaughter that she want to be like grandma when she grows up. A very good compliment from a little girl.
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Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Thank you for your review and comments.I am crazy about my grandchildren,and sometimes they just melt my heart.
