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Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Grandmas little angel"
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Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hello Kirby. I love short poetry because you have to make every single word project what you want your audience to hear. This one is playful and just plain fun. Good luck in your contest. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 30-May-2017


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
    Thank you for your review and comments I do appreciate it.Have a great day
Comment from Heather Knight
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You must have felt very proud when you heard those words.
Both your poem and your picture are lovely. They are so cute and happy-looking.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-May-2017


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
    Thank you for your comment and review, yes it did make me feel proud.I love watching them.
Comment from loismddavis
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your poem and picture fit the designation of sweetest I believe. It expresses the delight of listening to and being amazed by little children. having your grandchildren emulate you is the best compliment you can receive

 Comment Written 30-May-2017


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
    Thank you for your review,I appreciate it.I love having my grandchildren when they are here.I am blessed.
Comment from Irish Rain
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Well, what a wonderful compliment! Extra cookies earned!! This is an adorable short poem, love the beautiful picture, good luck, blessings....

 Comment Written 25-May-2017


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
    Thank you for your review and comment,I appreciate it.My Grandchildren makes my heart full of joy and happiness.I am so blessed to be able to watch them grow.
Comment from Mai Mai
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This is an interesting piece. I couldn't help thinking of my granddaughter whom I adore & who adores me as well. Listening to them play can be so humbling. Good job and good luck.

Mai Mai

 Comment Written 25-May-2017


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
    Thank you for your review and comment I do appreciate it.I do adore my grandchildren,I am blessed to be able to watch them learn,grow and play at my house while I have them.
Comment from Dean Kuch
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A-w-w-wwwww... how sweet, S.M. Kirby.
I have not had the pleasure of becoming a grandparent myself, although I do have four boys and one daughter that range in age from 37-20 years of age, my daughter being the youngest.
Perhaps one day I'll know how awesome it feels to hear my grandchild say something similar to what you've shared with us here.
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 Comment Written 25-May-2017


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
    Dean, Thank you for your review and comment,I do appreciate it.I hope one day you are Blessed with having grandchildren also.
reply by Dean Kuch on 02-Jun-2017
    Having five children ranging from the ages of 37-20, it's bound to happen sooner or later, s.m. kirby.
    Have a great weekend, you're more than welcome.
    ~Dean
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes my friend this is well written its lovely to see grandchildren play and have fun and join in once in a while well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 24-May-2017


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
    Thank you for your review and comment.I do appreciate it.I love watching my grandchildren.
Comment from valmay
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What beautiful sentiments in this little gem. A lovely picture to accompany. Very best wishes in the competition, you've already got first prize in life.

 Comment Written 24-May-2017


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
    Thank you for your review and comment.I do appreciate it,Yes I do have first prize in life,I am crazy about my grandchildren.
Comment from angel123
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Your artwork choice is cute and it enhances your message. Your poem is cute and well-written and good alliteration of words she's saying.

angel123

 Comment Written 24-May-2017


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
    Thank you for your review and comment. I appreciate it.Have A Bless day.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Such joy in this picture! Warm, loving and they obviously love Gramdma very much that they want to be just like her. Your words speak volumes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-May-2017


reply by the author on 24-May-2017
    Thank you for your review.This grandma loves them very much.