Out of the mouth of babes
playing with dolls2 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
Awww, how wonderful it would be to hear your grandchild saying such a thing.
It would at the very least let you know how much you were loved, admired, looked up to, and respected.
I haven't had the pleasure of becoming a grandparent...yet.
Perhaps one day I'll know how wonderful it feels.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Awww, how wonderful it would be to hear your grandchild saying such a thing.
It would at the very least let you know how much you were loved, admired, looked up to, and respected.
I haven't had the pleasure of becoming a grandparent...yet.
Perhaps one day I'll know how wonderful it feels.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Thank you for your review and comment I appreciate it .I love my two grand children.
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My pleasure. :)
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your entry for the short poem contest. Within the lines of your poem you have shown what children will do and say while they play.
A suggestion; maybe use a picture or the advanced editor to enhance the font,
~patty~
I just read this same poem under another title - we are only supposed to post a work ONE time
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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thank you for sharing your entry for the short poem contest. Within the lines of your poem you have shown what children will do and say while they play.
A suggestion; maybe use a picture or the advanced editor to enhance the font,
~patty~
I just read this same poem under another title - we are only supposed to post a work ONE time
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Thank you for your review I hit the wrong button to change the title of poem sorry I was trying to edit it I ended up deleting it.
