We Cannot Force Others
Be careful with our words15 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Patricia,
I enjoyed your poem. You did a great job with the style of an etheree, right? Your words line up nicely. But more importantly, the message is clear & so true.
Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Patricia,
I enjoyed your poem. You did a great job with the style of an etheree, right? Your words line up nicely. But more importantly, the message is clear & so true.
Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Thank you for the nice review, Jan. Yes it is an etheree.
Comment from Pquack
AMEN! Very true and I love the simplicity of it. Something that we are missing in the day and age is straight forward and to the point words. Thank you for you writing and please continue!
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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AMEN! Very true and I love the simplicity of it. Something that we are missing in the day and age is straight forward and to the point words. Thank you for you writing and please continue!
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review. Welcome to fanstory and I do hop to read more of your work. Patricia
Comment from MaggieF
Lovely picture. This is so true, let people follow your example, live a good life, that is much better than preaching at people forcing your views on them. Love the shape of your poem. MaggieF
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Lovely picture. This is so true, let people follow your example, live a good life, that is much better than preaching at people forcing your views on them. Love the shape of your poem. MaggieF
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Maggie
Comment from Sasha
This is a lovely nonet and beautifully written. Your words are so true. We cannot force others to believe what we believe and only hope our actions and behavior will show them the right path to take. Very nice work with this one.
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reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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This is a lovely nonet and beautifully written. Your words are so true. We cannot force others to believe what we believe and only hope our actions and behavior will show them the right path to take. Very nice work with this one.
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Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Sasha.
Comment from Mustang Patty
No, we cannot force others to believe what we do, but we can pray for them. Planting seeds has always been good enough, and I hope I'm an example, and plant seeds by showing people how I am able to stand up to adversity.
Thank you for sharing this well structured poem,
~patty~
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reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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No, we cannot force others to believe what we do, but we can pray for them. Planting seeds has always been good enough, and I hope I'm an example, and plant seeds by showing people how I am able to stand up to adversity.
Thank you for sharing this well structured poem,
~patty~
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Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Patty.
