Comment from Thal1959

Excellent

A very nicely written short poem about a relatively universal idea that everyone can relate to. Not easy to do with so few words to work with, especially working in four rhymes! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

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reply by the author on 25-May-2017

Thanks for reading.

reply by Thal1959 on 25-May-2017

You're welcome - it was my pleasure.

Comment from angel123

Excellent

Your short poem is simple and straight to the point. I like your artwork choice and it flows and rhymes well with a good message.

angel123

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

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reply by the author on 25-May-2017

Thanks for your review.

Comment from Pquack

Good

Lovely descriptive writing. you captured me in such a short amount of time and so few words. I actually felt as if the moon is yours :) Beautiful. Keep writing and enjoy every moment :)

 Comment Written 23-May-2017

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reply by the author on 23-May-2017

Thanks for reading.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

thank you for sharing this short poem about the moon. Your presentation was lovely and within each line, you have given us your love for the moon. It is one of those things that hangs in the sky for all of our lives. Well done and good luck in the contest,
~patty~

 Comment Written 23-May-2017

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reply by the author on 23-May-2017

Thanks, Patty.