Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

I would guess you were fighting with yourself. Your shadow. your aberration. Drunk on your behind to say the least.
That would be enough to sober a man up. Good job. Nancy

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Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

I like your writing usually, my friend, but do not get this one lol. The end... did a bouncer throw you out or your own reflection? It is well written, hence the five but it did leave me scratching my head. Thank you for sharing.

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Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

Short, sharp and straight to the point -
well written enough, Brett, but I felt I wanted more...


My punch landed...in the middle of the wall.
My punch landed ... in the middle of the wall - space on each side.


Margaret

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Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

You tell quite a story in so few words. When on is in a bar, it would behoove him to be careful that he not take on a shadow when he begins swinging his fist. It could be painful to say the least. Patricia

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Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Brett,

I always like what you write. You are great at writing stories.
I will continue to read them as they are always so nice to read.

Kat

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You're welcome. Kat

reply by MizKat on 08-Jun-2017

You're very welcome Brett. Kat

Comment from Sankey

Excellent

Good work, mate. Held me in wonderment right through. Seems it could have been a lot longer but the Author's notes were most helpful. I have finished my Autobiography. Just got Thal going over a chapter he ripped (in edit)all the commas out of, finally corrected. Looks like I might have to write my own Foreword. I believe a few others have done the same? Cheers.

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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

LOL well at least you can look back on it and realize you are still alive. This was really cute and even more so to realize it was all true. Very well written, still have the scars?

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written flash fiction. When a man goes into a bar, he should first look around and see if there are anyone bigger than him, if so, rather stay out of trouble or you can be thrown out before you know where the shadow comes from. Lol.

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Comment from bookishfabler

Excellent

I definitely do not think your writing sucks. I believe you punched yourself in the mirror. That was what I got out of your story. I'm glad you are better. I like V8 too.
hugs Heidi

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Comment from Sanku

Excellent

do you know what the shadow was? this question is intriguing .
who was he or what was he'
you tell the story in a very interesting manner.
why were you subjected to that harsh treatment .Was he just a stalker?

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