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Saddened hearts

A terrible night

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Comment from l.raven
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HI Waves, I can't even stand to turn the news on...this just broke my heart...it has got to stop...I told my fried the other day...you can't go anywhere where you are safe anymore...so very sad...and my prayers are with them all...very well written my friend...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 26-May-2017

reply by the author on 27-May-2017
    It was another sad event. Terrorism is becoming a disease in innocent public places and the selfishness of suicide bombings is even worse. Its a sad , sad world that we don't even feel safe anymore.

    dip
reply by l.raven on 28-May-2017
    you are so right Waves...it breaks my heart...things have got to change...love xxoo
Comment from marybell1
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You wrote a beautiful poem "Sadden Hearts". I agree it is a terrible tragedy, but unfortunately it will not be the last.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

reply by the author on 24-May-2017
    It is sad to think we cannot stop these evil acts. This was another terrible tragedy in senseless killing.
    It is a sad world we live in that these atrocities can still go on.
    Thankyou Marybell

    dip
Comment from Mustang Patty
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dip; its so hard to believe we are facing yet another senseless tragedy. Will this all ever come to an end? I'm afraid we will have to face more; we just can't let the fear control our lives. Thank you for sharing your grief,
~patty~

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

reply by the author on 24-May-2017
    It's a terrible tragedy like all of these senseless acts of terrorism.

    dip
Comment from dragonpoet
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This is a good ode to those that died in Manchester, England. We all mourn the loss of lived taken anywhere because of terrorism. We all wish it would end. Also we feel the loss of safety and freedom.

Keep writing

Joan

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

reply by the author on 24-May-2017
    Thankyou Joan glad you could see my tribute and respect

    dip
reply by dragonpoet on 24-May-2017
    You're welcome, dip.

    Joan
reply by dragonpoet on 24-May-2017
    You're welcome, dip.

    Joan
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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I found it hard to review this my friend it is beautifully written so many young innocent lives lost because of an evil monster or maybe organisation decided it was what they wanted to do getting their kicks from devastation they cause but we will never bow down and hide away yes it is frightening but terrorism will never win regards Jill

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

reply by the author on 24-May-2017
    Thankyou so much for the wonderful 6 Jill but it pales into insignificance to the meaning and sadness of this poem.

    dip
Comment from Thal1959
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Really good, D., though I am sad to inform you it is quite naïve. The problem is Islam, not terrorism. As long as people allow Islam into their countries, this sort of thing will happen over and over again.

 Comment Written 23-May-2017

reply by the author on 23-May-2017
    Thankyou Thal I was trying not to specify I didn't want to upset people and target them especially but we all know where the problem stems from

    thanks for the review Thal much appreciated as always

    dip
reply by Thal1959 on 24-May-2017
    You're right, D. when you say we all know where the problem stems from... by why is no one in a position to do something about it willing to act?
Comment from Susanjohn
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and yet another attack....this world is a scary place. Those poor families,...my heart just breaks for them. you are sooo right! this has to stop dip...

 Comment Written 23-May-2017

reply by the author on 23-May-2017
    It's so terrible Susan it has to stop The world has gone crazy

    dip
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written poem about this senseless tragedy in Manchester. It makes no sense! Just plain evil! We had that happen in the states too more than once. We do need to pray for the ones left behind. How can you comprehend such tragedy. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 23-May-2017

reply by the author on 23-May-2017
    It was a senseless tragedy What on earth would be this person's motive to do something so evil as this.

    thanks for commenting and reviewing as always

    dip
reply by Teri7 on 24-May-2017
    It had to be just plain evil! no other explanation I can see my friend!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Dr D,
You did a great job with your rhyming for this strong poem. Your message is clear. It is/was a horrific act that is repeated too many times. I can tell you wrote this with great emotion--that comes through in your words. Thanks for sharing & caring. Jan

 Comment Written 23-May-2017

reply by the author on 23-May-2017
    Thankyou so much Jan much appreciated

    dip
Comment from Pantygynt
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Well done Dip. I have done one on this subject too. I finished about an hour ago and am now rushing to earn the $$ to post it. So you have beaten me to the draw. I think I have been what is called "scooped" in the journalistic world.

 Comment Written 23-May-2017

reply by the author on 23-May-2017
    it matters not, yours will be just as poignant I am sure. It's a terrible tragedy

    Thanks as always

    dip