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Wake Me For Tomorrow

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Comment from ScarletAffliction
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How fun to see your name pop up, old fanstory buddy. I got a birthday notice. lol. Happy Belated, dude!! Also, great poem!!!! It was smooooth and easy and comfortable. Great read. :)

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
    Hello beautiful!! It is most very awesomeness to see your name again! xx
reply by ScarletAffliction on 20-Jun-2018
    :)
Comment from Mustang Patty
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thank you for sharing this moving piece about love and loss. Sometimes we all long to have good memories and the desire to move past the pain,
~patty~

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

reply by the author on 24-May-2017
    Hi there Patty,
    thankyou for the cool thoughts and the time given to read and review.
    Appreciated
    Cheers
    G #~:)
Comment from Pantygynt
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Without the aid or confusion of added tadpoles this piece came over quite clearly. Poetry is often like that. I have found this more usually the case in free verse where it is often written without their aid. It is less usual in a strongly rhymed and metered piece such as this. The meter iambic trimeter with feminine endings on the b rhyme is rarely used throughout a poem of this length, being more frequently found alternating with iambic tetrameter.

I struggled a bit with the fourth stanza, wanting to read it as trochaic in lines one and three, but when I pushed it back into iambic it worked, though not bas well as the other stanzas.

 Comment Written 23-May-2017

reply by the author on 23-May-2017
    Hi there Pantygynt,
    I love it when reviews show such an input of time and effort!
    Thank you for your astute thoughts and the time taken to read and comment..
    I very much appreciate it.
    Cheers
    Grant #:~]
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I loved the meter and the punchy lines about life and the challenges therein. There are some sad connotations here, grief and loss come to mind, have a good day, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-May-2017

reply by the author on 23-May-2017
    Hi Dolly,
    thanks for the time given to read and review, I really appreciate it.
    Cheers
    G #:~)
Comment from Irish Rain
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I just love the line, ...'Bring out your dead'....and 'a memory in my eye.' This is wonderful, and like any exceptional poem, no picture needed. Loved this, blessings...

 Comment Written 22-May-2017

reply by the author on 23-May-2017
    Hi there Irish Rain,
    thank you very much for the review and the fantastic thoughts.
    Much appreciated!
    Cheers
    G #:~)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about feelings about every day life thoights we randomly feel and think about every day. We will always have memories about our every day life.

 Comment Written 22-May-2017

reply by the author on 23-May-2017
    Hello Sandra,
    I really appreciate the thoughts! Thank you.
    Cheers
    #:~)
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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You also seem to enjoy alliteration, in your notes, any way.

If you have to face tomorrow you might as well do with "a smile inside my heart" as you stated in this well written poem.

 Comment Written 22-May-2017

reply by the author on 23-May-2017
    Hey there Brett,
    yeh... just felt right and more words kept asking to join in! lol

    Thanks for the thoughts mate
    Cheers
    G #:~)
Comment from oliver818
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I really enjoyed your poem, it has really nice imagery, rhythm and flow. It flows well and is easy to read. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day!

 Comment Written 22-May-2017

reply by the author on 23-May-2017
    Hi there Oliver,
    thank you for the great comments and YOU... sir... have a nice day too !
    Cheers
    G #:~)
Comment from KyColonel Randal
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Thank you for sharing. Wow, you've been here since 2004--that's quite a bit of time. I wonder why I didn't come across this site sooner than I did. I do enjoy a good bit of meter and rhyme.

 Comment Written 22-May-2017

reply by the author on 23-May-2017
    Hello there KyColonel,
    I appreciate the time spent in reading and reviewing. Thank you.
    I am very sporadic here but do have quite a big Portfolio if you are bored....take a torch and sandwiches
    Cheers
    G #:~)
Comment from papa55mike
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Well, that's different and I always like different. I really like the "fondly take a beating to bring thoughts of love" now that's true love. I love your name!

Have a great day and God bless.
mike

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 Comment Written 21-May-2017

reply by the author on 21-May-2017
    Hi Mike !
    Thank you for the great thoughts . I don't like the rigid conformity in the poetry world because it takes away from the important thing which is feelings and emotions!
    Cheers
    G #:~)