Comment from C.A. Wittman

Good

I thought the pacing was good and the story intriguing. Sometimes I was a little confused about which characters were talking and who they were. Mildred, for example, I assume is the governess?

I will definitely read more:)

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 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017

Hi, thank you for going back and reading the beginning of this book. I've sent you a PM with a synopsis of the first book in the trilogy, I hope it helps with the characters. Mildred has been around since the beginning and has her own fan club now! LOL. I've taken the book off now as I'm hoping to get it published. I'm really pleased you are enjoying it still, without having read the first book. That is so encouraging. :) Sandra xxx

reply by C.A. Wittman on 26-Aug-2017

I see. I asked you in another post if this book, This Time-That Time was the first in your trilogy and I understand now that it is part two. Makes more sense. Thank you.

Comment from wordsfromsue

Excellent

I like the mysterious group of men at the beginning, they left me with questions right away.
And now a few years have gone by, I'm curious if Veronica had any unusual occurrences during that time?
It sounds like you're setting up another good mystery.
I'm glad Mildred is along for the ride. :-)

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017

Hi Sue! Thank you! Four parts in one hit, that's so nice of you, you must be really bored resting your back!! LOL Bless your heart for reading all this, I hope you'll continue, you'll love part 6! Big hugs, my friend!! xxxxxxxxxxxx

Comment from Margaret Ford

Excellent

Hi, Sandra. I like the time-shifting aspect of this story. Often, science fiction is too much written in a mans world: lots of machinery and other guy-stuff. Your work focuses on relationships, and the practical problems that time-shifting would create. This is a work I would definitely like to buy in book form. I suppose that will take awhile, since the story seems like it will have quite a few more chapters. I look forward to the next one.

 Comment Written 25-May-2017

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reply by the author on 25-May-2017

Hi, Margaret, Thank you so very much for your wonderful review, it is so encouraging and I really appreciate it. I'm chuffed to bits that you like it so far. Thanks, my friend. :) xxx

Comment from Leena

Excellent

This is a perfect beginning for a wonderful fiction in the making. Already very curious to know how the story proceeds. I'm sure its going to be as engaging... Good luck to you.

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

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reply by the author on 25-May-2017

Thank you so much, Leena, for reading my first part and for the wonderful comments. I really appreciated it. Big hugs, Sandra xxx

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

I hadn't thought about telling James; I didn't think I'd need to, or that I'd be time travelling again. It just hadn't entered my mind. After Lady Ann and Peter had been brought out of the cesspit and given a Christian burial, I'd thought my work in the past was finished.

"How on earth can I do that? Can you imagine what he'll think? Oh dear, it's not as if I have any control over these things. And Ann, what of her? Will she grow up and start time travelling?" I groaned as I put my elbows on the table and rested my thudding head in my hands, massaging my forehead with my fingers. "I can't just go leaping off into other peoples' bodies and lives. I've got two young children now and a husband to look after!" '
You should not be one bit nervous you smashed this this is so interesting to read and so much enjoyed! well done I think you have nailed it Sandra and look forward with anticipation to reading more ,kindest regards Meia x

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

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reply by the author on 24-May-2017

That is such a lovely review, thank you so very much, Meia! I hope you enjoy each part that I post as much. Biggest hugs, my friend! :) Sandra xxx

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Hi, Sandra, so the root of Veronica's travelling adventures are being manipulated by "others" whoever others may be. Even Ann is traveling, although she can't separate reality from time travel...as yet. Good to see you in the writing "saddle" Sandra, well done, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

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reply by the author on 24-May-2017

Hi, Roy, how are you? It's lovely to see you again. I've been away for a while, but back now. Are you back for good? I hope so. Thank you so much for reading the first part of my (hopefully) new book. Bless you, my friend! :) Sandra xxx

reply by royowen on 24-May-2017

Not really back Sandra, I've posted five this Sandra, but I'm reviewing, I like reading and keeping in touch, good to see you too.

Comment from write hand blue

Exceptional

Hi Sandra. I like the originality of this chapter. You draw reader into the story and we can relate to the travel back in time, because I'm sure we all wonder at times about our ancestors.
Don't be nervous, I can see no errors... ~Mel~

 Comment Written 24-May-2017

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reply by the author on 24-May-2017

Thank you, Mel, so very much for this really lovely review and for the shiny 6 stars! That is so kind of you. Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx

Comment from Ben Colder

Exceptional

This reminds me of my son when he a small lad. His imaginary friend was name Bobby. I have no clue where this name came from but to him Bobby was real. Sorry to be late . Working on the book. Publisher is shouting. LOL.

 Comment Written 23-May-2017

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reply by the author on 24-May-2017

I read somewhere that children's imaginary friends were actually from the spirit world and they only lose the ability to see and speak to them as they grow older. I think that's because they stop listening, and they are finding more 'real' friends. Just a thought, LOL. Thank you so much my friend for sharing your story and a big hug for the 6 stars! :) Sandy xxx

How exciting, you have a publisher and it will soon be in print. Is this the story which includes your grandmother? I loved that story and I'll be buying the book when it comes out. You must let us know when that happens. Good luck with it, my friend! xxx

reply by Ben Colder on 24-May-2017

Yes, Grandmother Maude begins the story for it all happened within her era and geographical area. Of course I spun it into fiction for the sake of innocence. I do hope you like the rewrite as well. I leave a jumping off place for sequel if the public desires. Thank you my precious friend for you kind support.

Comment from rwilliam

Excellent

I'm so sad I"m all out of six stars.

I LOVE time travel stories and this is going to be good, I can feel it...YAY!!

Great idea and intriguing. I look forward to getting 'lost' in your story.

Congratulations on the awards.

 Comment Written 23-May-2017

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reply by the author on 24-May-2017

Thank you so much for you wonderful review! Just knowing you enjoyed my first part is worth more than all the 6 stars you could give. Bless you! :) Sandra xx

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Hello,

I think the title is neat. I think you are doing a great job, don't be nervous :D

I really liked these sentences: A gnawing sense of foreboding engulfed me as I went over and sat on the chair next to Ann at the table."He's my bestest ever friend, Mummy, and I wanted you to help him," her chin trembled making her voice wobble (You did a great job with child lingo).

 Comment Written 23-May-2017

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reply by the author on 23-May-2017

Thank you so much, Rasmine! That is so nice of you to say so. I'm delighted you enjoyed the first part. Hope to see you again. :) Sandra xx