When You Spot this Bird
Colors catch your eye.......10 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, When You Spot This Bird, seems to be using an rd-winged blackbird (Agelaius phoeniceus) as the type of bird that makes bird watchers watch.
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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This 5-7-5, When You Spot This Bird, seems to be using an rd-winged blackbird (Agelaius phoeniceus) as the type of bird that makes bird watchers watch.
Comment Written 21-May-2017
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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Thank you for the excellent review and great comments. Have a great week!
Comment from BeasPeas
You have selected a gorgeous bird to illustrate your poem. Thanks for choosing it as the focus. Nature does give striking color to its wildlife. Marilyn
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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You have selected a gorgeous bird to illustrate your poem. Thanks for choosing it as the focus. Nature does give striking color to its wildlife. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-May-2017
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind comments. Have a great week!
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
You've written a nice poem.
It consists of three lines with a syllable count of 5-7-5
I can clearly see that this poem meets the requirements of the contest.
Lovely artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this poem. The background color goes well with the art and font color chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Blackbird.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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You've written a nice poem.
It consists of three lines with a syllable count of 5-7-5
I can clearly see that this poem meets the requirements of the contest.
Lovely artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this poem. The background color goes well with the art and font color chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Blackbird.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 21-May-2017
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Have a great week!
Comment from J. Salvatore
This poem is lovely, as it expresses a lot in 17 syllables. It involves the reader and captures a precise experience of beauty, which is imbued with deeper meaning. It is a wonderful example of poetry, to create the grander experience of color as God's Gift through one imagining.
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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This poem is lovely, as it expresses a lot in 17 syllables. It involves the reader and captures a precise experience of beauty, which is imbued with deeper meaning. It is a wonderful example of poetry, to create the grander experience of color as God's Gift through one imagining.
Comment Written 21-May-2017
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Have a great week!
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 Poem "When you spot this bird". You had all the lines and syllables correct and you chose a beautiful bird.
Best of luck in the contest.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 Poem "When you spot this bird". You had all the lines and syllables correct and you chose a beautiful bird.
Best of luck in the contest.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 21-May-2017
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Have a great week!
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1
Comment from Vijay Kumar V
Simple superb. I love the last line, God's gift of colour. For it also adds a point that we all are gifted each of us have our uniqueness. And no cloud is small. Good luck. Namaste.
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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Simple superb. I love the last line, God's gift of colour. For it also adds a point that we all are gifted each of us have our uniqueness. And no cloud is small. Good luck. Namaste.
Comment Written 20-May-2017
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Have a great week!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
That bird looks like it's wearing the epiliths Latin American dictator. Senior Hugo Chaves, His Excellency, supreme ruler of south Argentina.
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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That bird looks like it's wearing the epiliths Latin American dictator. Senior Hugo Chaves, His Excellency, supreme ruler of south Argentina.
Comment Written 20-May-2017
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and interesting comments! Have a great week!
Comment from JennaG
The colors in nature truly are a gift from God! They make life so much more interesting and they really do catch your eye. The bird in your poem is a wonderful example of that. Your syllable count is perfect and I like the picture you've chosen. Great work! Best of luck to you in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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The colors in nature truly are a gift from God! They make life so much more interesting and they really do catch your eye. The bird in your poem is a wonderful example of that. Your syllable count is perfect and I like the picture you've chosen. Great work! Best of luck to you in the contest! :)
Comment Written 20-May-2017
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Have a great week!
Comment from Poetic Friend
You are correct, this bird can be easily spotted. You executed the form to perfection. However, without the artwork the reader may not grasp that you are referring to a blackbird. Perhaps you may want to consider changing the title to something where the blackbird is mentioned. Just a thought. Please feel free to ignore my suggestion. What do I know? I love the poem regardless.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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You are correct, this bird can be easily spotted. You executed the form to perfection. However, without the artwork the reader may not grasp that you are referring to a blackbird. Perhaps you may want to consider changing the title to something where the blackbird is mentioned. Just a thought. Please feel free to ignore my suggestion. What do I know? I love the poem regardless.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2017
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. I really appreciated your suggestion - thank you.
Have a great week!
Comment from MaggieF
Wow you couldn't miss that bird. Great alliteration. These birds were definitely made to be watched, is that the male bird? they are usually the most striking. MaggieF
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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Wow you couldn't miss that bird. Great alliteration. These birds were definitely made to be watched, is that the male bird? they are usually the most striking. MaggieF
Comment Written 20-May-2017
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Have a great week!
