New Hope
a naani15 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Naani. It is great to wake up in the morning while the birds start to send out their tweets to tell the world the sun will rise soon, and to get ready for the day.
reply by the author on 21-May-2017
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A very well-written Naani. It is great to wake up in the morning while the birds start to send out their tweets to tell the world the sun will rise soon, and to get ready for the day.
Comment Written 21-May-2017
reply by the author on 21-May-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging feedback!
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, what an adorable picture you paint with your Naani! Loved the picture too, it blends with the poem.
I especially loved God's choir metaphor.
I wish you a lot of luck in the contest with this excellent entry.
reply by the author on 21-May-2017
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Oh, what an adorable picture you paint with your Naani! Loved the picture too, it blends with the poem.
I especially loved God's choir metaphor.
I wish you a lot of luck in the contest with this excellent entry.
Comment Written 21-May-2017
reply by the author on 21-May-2017
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Thank you! Reflects my mood on a lazy Sunday afternoon...
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend a brand new day starting with the dawn chorus reminding us that we have a lot to be thankful for and how lucky we truly are well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 21-May-2017
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Yes my friend a brand new day starting with the dawn chorus reminding us that we have a lot to be thankful for and how lucky we truly are well done regards Jill
Comment Written 21-May-2017
reply by the author on 21-May-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging words!
Comment from Janilou
Your poem is delightful and the artwork you chose to accompany it reminds me of the years I spent in the Australian countryside waking up to the exact sounds you refer to.
There is something absolutely breathtakingly beautiful about a flock of those white cockatoos, and the galahs also.
Well written. I really enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.
Jan
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reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Your poem is delightful and the artwork you chose to accompany it reminds me of the years I spent in the Australian countryside waking up to the exact sounds you refer to.
There is something absolutely breathtakingly beautiful about a flock of those white cockatoos, and the galahs also.
Well written. I really enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.
Jan
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Comment Written 19-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Thank you so much for your positive feedback!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice Naani poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and the art work you chose was perfect. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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This is a very nice Naani poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and the art work you chose was perfect. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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Comment Written 19-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Many thanks for your encouraging comments!
