A million stars
The brightest star18 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Waves, yes they do...I often look a the stars and remember times of love...when thinking of that special guy I had butterflies...knowing my world was safe...I love your beautiful poem my sweet friend...and your picture is beautiful...soooooo very nicely written you...love xxoo Linda
reply by the author on 20-May-2017
HI Waves, yes they do...I often look a the stars and remember times of love...when thinking of that special guy I had butterflies...knowing my world was safe...I love your beautiful poem my sweet friend...and your picture is beautiful...soooooo very nicely written you...love xxoo Linda
Comment Written 19-May-2017
reply by the author on 20-May-2017
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Thankyou my sweet Linda you always make me feel good about my poetry
xdip
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IT"S GREAT!!!! soooooo welcome you...xxoo love
Comment from Teri7
Dip, This is a very nice romantic poem about the stars. When I was a little girl I would look at the stars and make wishes on them. Did they come true? Maybe, maybe not, but I was really little! Great job. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
Dip, This is a very nice romantic poem about the stars. When I was a little girl I would look at the stars and make wishes on them. Did they come true? Maybe, maybe not, but I was really little! Great job. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 19-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Thankyou Teri your comments are always appreciated.
dip
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes, my friend, this is well written a very romantic poetic journey you take the readers on beautifully presented well-done regards Jill
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
Yes, my friend, this is well written a very romantic poetic journey you take the readers on beautifully presented well-done regards Jill
Comment Written 19-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Thankyou so much Jill always appreciate your comments glad you liked this one as well
dip
Comment from closetpoetjester
Obviously you never grow tired of dreaming of your star crossed lover Toits.
Some very interesting solar exploration over heavenly terrain, no doubt haha
Nicely done.
Some sixual excitement this end LOL
Px
Okay, it was the "twinkle" in your eye that got me.
No, not that eye LOL
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
Obviously you never grow tired of dreaming of your star crossed lover Toits.
Some very interesting solar exploration over heavenly terrain, no doubt haha
Nicely done.
Some sixual excitement this end LOL
Px
Okay, it was the "twinkle" in your eye that got me.
No, not that eye LOL
Comment Written 19-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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hehe you are a 'crack' up with your double dild..sorry I mean double innuendo
Thanks for the big six...it goes well with my other big sixer
xxdip
I work in pixels and mm
I'm a graphic artist LOL
It's NOT looking good Toits...or large LOL
x
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I still measure in inches..don't get nervous haha
I always reach the sweet spot, that's all that matters
in my dreams lol
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Well it's a fine line between pleasure and pain and I like to articulate that in mm babe LOL
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hahaha ..bitch lol
xxdip
Comment from Gloria ....
Very nice imagery in this one, dip. It's always comforting to look up into the night sky and feel that a loved one's soul is shining down on us.
Excellent.
Gloria
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
Very nice imagery in this one, dip. It's always comforting to look up into the night sky and feel that a loved one's soul is shining down on us.
Excellent.
Gloria
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Thankyou so much Gloria I really appreciate your comments and review
dip
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Dr D,
This is a great presentation--the art is beautiful, the colors work well, the rhymes are super, & your message is well expressed. Good job on a special poem for your loved one. Jan
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
Dr D,
This is a great presentation--the art is beautiful, the colors work well, the rhymes are super, & your message is well expressed. Good job on a special poem for your loved one. Jan
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Thankyou so much Jan much appreciated.
dip
Comment from Sis Cat
Dip, this is an exceptional poem here. You outdone yourself with an imaginative and romantic use of metaphor, calling to mind the quote from Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet about star crossed lovers. Your poem not only paints a picture of the night sky, but of the heart. What woman would not fall for this poem when she is described as the brightest star in a man's universe. This is a perfect poem of love.
Thank you for sharing your talents again.
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
Dip, this is an exceptional poem here. You outdone yourself with an imaginative and romantic use of metaphor, calling to mind the quote from Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet about star crossed lovers. Your poem not only paints a picture of the night sky, but of the heart. What woman would not fall for this poem when she is described as the brightest star in a man's universe. This is a perfect poem of love.
Thank you for sharing your talents again.
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Andre, you continually make my day. Your reviews are always supportive and encouraging. Wow a 6 thank you so much.
I always appreciative.
dip
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I bet you can see more stars in Australia than anywhere else in the world! We have clear nights here in the Canaries, but it's mainly satalites I can see! He he he. But I realise your poem is about the jewels of love and devotion and finding your star in a relationship! I have mine! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
I bet you can see more stars in Australia than anywhere else in the world! We have clear nights here in the Canaries, but it's mainly satalites I can see! He he he. But I realise your poem is about the jewels of love and devotion and finding your star in a relationship! I have mine! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Thanks Dolly I am so glad you have found your shining star. Thanks for your review as always
dip
Comment from Dean Kuch
Everyone, dipster?
Not quite, mate, heh-heh.
You wanna know what I think of when I look up at a starry sky at night?
I think of how small and insignificant I truly am in the grand scheme of the universe.
My problems seem smaller than they once seemed, and insignificant as well.
I do sometimes gaze up and wonder if my ex just happens to be looking up at the same stars, at the same time as I am. And if she is, what she's thinking of.
Other than that, I just enjoy their beauty.
Great poem, my friend. Very touching.
~Deano
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
Everyone, dipster?
Not quite, mate, heh-heh.
You wanna know what I think of when I look up at a starry sky at night?
I think of how small and insignificant I truly am in the grand scheme of the universe.
My problems seem smaller than they once seemed, and insignificant as well.
I do sometimes gaze up and wonder if my ex just happens to be looking up at the same stars, at the same time as I am. And if she is, what she's thinking of.
Other than that, I just enjoy their beauty.
Great poem, my friend. Very touching.
~Deano
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Yeah I suppose you are right Deano. not everyone sees stars metaphorically or emotionally. Thanks for your wonderful insight as always
dip
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You bet, dip.
I am an avid stargazer who has two very powerful telescopes. More often than not you'll find me outside during the spring, summer, and autumn months gazing up at the sky.
It's very humbling, and therapeutic as well.
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sweet I never knew that. I have to do that one day with a telescope.
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
WOW WHAT A BEAUTIFUL POEM I WISH I HAD
SOMEONE WRITE ME SOMTHING JUST AS SWEET
AS THIS YOU AMAZE ME EVERY TIME I SEE YOUR NAME
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
WOW WHAT A BEAUTIFUL POEM I WISH I HAD
SOMEONE WRITE ME SOMTHING JUST AS SWEET
AS THIS YOU AMAZE ME EVERY TIME I SEE YOUR NAME
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Wow a 6 thanks so much Abby you are too kind but its always a pleasure and an honour for me that you feel that way about my poetry. Simple but always heartfelt.
dip