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A man and his love for his dog has no boundries33 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is an interesting use of monorhyme for the nonet contest. It is a tongue twister for sure. Good job on the syllable counts per line. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
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This is an interesting use of monorhyme for the nonet contest. It is a tongue twister for sure. Good job on the syllable counts per line. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 18-May-2017
Comment from Irish Rain
Well, you certainly have lots of 'F' words here, ha ha. Was it a contest requirement? That's one heck of a fish he's holding. Lucky Fido! Blessings....
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Well, you certainly have lots of 'F' words here, ha ha. Was it a contest requirement? That's one heck of a fish he's holding. Lucky Fido! Blessings....
Comment Written 18-May-2017
Comment from Dawn Munro
LOL - okay, I can appreciate the humour - I'm not sure how well it will go over with the judges, but I get it, and I enjoyed it (although Fido and his funky fish kinda turn my stomach - hahahaha!) Absurd alliteration. *grin* Fab photo. Good luck. :))
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LOL - okay, I can appreciate the humour - I'm not sure how well it will go over with the judges, but I get it, and I enjoyed it (although Fido and his funky fish kinda turn my stomach - hahahaha!) Absurd alliteration. *grin* Fab photo. Good luck. :))
Comment Written 18-May-2017
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Excellent Nonet using only the letter 'f'....you have done a fantastic job in paying tribute to your pet dog...very well done
Love the inclusion of funky fish
Have a great evening
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Excellent Nonet using only the letter 'f'....you have done a fantastic job in paying tribute to your pet dog...very well done
Love the inclusion of funky fish
Have a great evening
Comment Written 18-May-2017
Comment from damommy
Quite an undertaking and well done.
You should sponsor a contest for poems like this. I think it would be a big hit. But, then again, it might make some of us work very hard. LOL.
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Quite an undertaking and well done.
You should sponsor a contest for poems like this. I think it would be a big hit. But, then again, it might make some of us work very hard. LOL.
Comment Written 18-May-2017
Comment from Oatmeal
MARK NESS,
You did a good job in this contest. I just wonder why you used all F words. This seems so much harder in my opinion but you still did a good job. Very well reflected thoughts. You should not feed the dog a fish because of the bones...right?????
Poor baby.
The poem flowed smoothly. The words you chose worked well.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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MARK NESS,
You did a good job in this contest. I just wonder why you used all F words. This seems so much harder in my opinion but you still did a good job. Very well reflected thoughts. You should not feed the dog a fish because of the bones...right?????
Poor baby.
The poem flowed smoothly. The words you chose worked well.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Thank you for review as well as caring for Fido's diet, fun review thanks
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahaha, wow, Mark!
This is an alliteration lover's dream Nonet, heh-heh. Somehow, I don't feel our illustrious CEC, the competition committee who judges all of the site sponsored contests here at FanStory like this one, will appreciate the effort involved.
But I sure do!
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Hahaha, wow, Mark!
This is an alliteration lover's dream Nonet, heh-heh. Somehow, I don't feel our illustrious CEC, the competition committee who judges all of the site sponsored contests here at FanStory like this one, will appreciate the effort involved.
But I sure do!
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Thanks for the heads up and for the happy thoughts
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You're more than welcome, Mark.
Best of luck!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nonet with a F alliteration right through which makes it a memorable poem. It seems you had it all thought out well. To combine Freddie and Fido with the Fish.
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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A very well-written Nonet with a F alliteration right through which makes it a memorable poem. It seems you had it all thought out well. To combine Freddie and Fido with the Fish.
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Yea Fido loves his fish and Freddy Thanks for review
Comment from tfawcus
This sounds like a fishy tale! Fido must be an exceptional sort of dog. Perhaps not though - I've known dogs that will eat anything just so long as it tastes rotten! Our old Labrador had a particular liking for cow manure. The only line in your nonet that seemed to me to be a slight stretch was "Freddy forbids fine fresh fish" as 'forbids' didn't seem to be quite the right word in the context. Perhaps 'foregoes' or 'foreswears'?
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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This sounds like a fishy tale! Fido must be an exceptional sort of dog. Perhaps not though - I've known dogs that will eat anything just so long as it tastes rotten! Our old Labrador had a particular liking for cow manure. The only line in your nonet that seemed to me to be a slight stretch was "Freddy forbids fine fresh fish" as 'forbids' didn't seem to be quite the right word in the context. Perhaps 'foregoes' or 'foreswears'?
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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F words are hard to come by sometimes Glad you liked the fish tail
Comment from Hitcher
I don't think I'm acquainted with funky fish, or Fido for that matter Freddy but if Freddy fears Fido's funky fish you might want to try him on...meat : ) A humorous little nonet for the contest, good luck!
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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I don't think I'm acquainted with funky fish, or Fido for that matter Freddy but if Freddy fears Fido's funky fish you might want to try him on...meat : ) A humorous little nonet for the contest, good luck!
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Meat is for Matt his cat, Molded meat mostly Thanks for good luck wishes
