Poison Pen
A monorhyme14 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is an excellent monorhyme entry. Unfortunately, a true commentary on some writers and/or reviewers. Presentation colors and illustration work well with your words. Good in-line and end-line rhyme. There is a typo to fix here: "It gave her a (delete "a") quite a thrill, Marilyn
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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This is an excellent monorhyme entry. Unfortunately, a true commentary on some writers and/or reviewers. Presentation colors and illustration work well with your words. Good in-line and end-line rhyme. There is a typo to fix here: "It gave her a (delete "a") quite a thrill, Marilyn
Comment Written 21-May-2017
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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Many thanks for catching this.
Comment from smileycloud
cool content
a great jaunty poem with so much fun
great flowing story line
very real imagery
the reader gets to delve into your poem with a mysterious tone
very talented
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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cool content
a great jaunty poem with so much fun
great flowing story line
very real imagery
the reader gets to delve into your poem with a mysterious tone
very talented
have a smiley day
Comment Written 21-May-2017
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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Thanks so much. This beautiful green star is greatly appreciated.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written monorhyme poem. Words are powerful and when we write them down it can either encourage or discourage the reader. We can even poison the reader with the words we write down.
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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A very well-written monorhyme poem. Words are powerful and when we write them down it can either encourage or discourage the reader. We can even poison the reader with the words we write down.
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Thanks so much for your thoughts and I appreciate you reading.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever write for the 'Mono-rhyme', love the repeated lines with well chosen words and a chilling tale of jealousy and revenge, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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A clever write for the 'Mono-rhyme', love the repeated lines with well chosen words and a chilling tale of jealousy and revenge, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Thanks so much.
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your Mono-rhyme poem "Poison Pen". I enjoyed the story and choice of photo and all your lines rhymed. Just one question - In line three. Did you intend to put in two a's?
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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I enjoyed reading your Mono-rhyme poem "Poison Pen". I enjoyed the story and choice of photo and all your lines rhymed. Just one question - In line three. Did you intend to put in two a's?
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 18-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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I will look at that-likely not and I really appreciate your correction.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from lyenochka
My! That's quite the list of rhymes! Despite the unusual repetition of the -ill rhymes, an entire story was told. I hope no one will be "grilled" further by the new writer.
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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My! That's quite the list of rhymes! Despite the unusual repetition of the -ill rhymes, an entire story was told. I hope no one will be "grilled" further by the new writer.
Comment Written 17-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Ha-me too. Thanks for reading.
Comment from Thesis
What a clever poem. I enjoyed the tone and rhyme, and especially the ending where she too succumbed to the poison pen of another. Many lessons in that write, so be careful when writing, especially reviews, LOL.
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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What a clever poem. I enjoyed the tone and rhyme, and especially the ending where she too succumbed to the poison pen of another. Many lessons in that write, so be careful when writing, especially reviews, LOL.
Comment Written 17-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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No doubt-haha. Thanks so much.
Comment from loismddavis
you have certainly fulfilled the requirement of the prompt with this poem and the picture personifies perfectly the nasty lady you have written about--she got her comeuppance by a new nasty writer. good job
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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you have certainly fulfilled the requirement of the prompt with this poem and the picture personifies perfectly the nasty lady you have written about--she got her comeuppance by a new nasty writer. good job
Comment Written 17-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Yes, there's always one-haha. Thanks for reading.
Comment from dragonpoet
This shows how writers can cause pain as well as happiness and peace. I hope there are not many like the person in the poem and artwork. I like how your mono-rhyme also included internal rhymes on each line with the end rhyme.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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This shows how writers can cause pain as well as happiness and peace. I hope there are not many like the person in the poem and artwork. I like how your mono-rhyme also included internal rhymes on each line with the end rhyme.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 17-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Thanks so much for reading and the review about this evil little writer-ha.
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You are so very welcome.
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Comment from Janet Foor
Poison Pen is an excellent mono rhyme poem and internal rhyme.
Great artwork to support your message.
Very nicely done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Poison Pen is an excellent mono rhyme poem and internal rhyme.
Great artwork to support your message.
Very nicely done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 17-May-2017
reply by the author on 18-May-2017
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Thanks so much. truly appreciated.
