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love in cyber blooms

5/7/5 love poem

3 total reviews 
Comment from BeasPeas
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I guess that's the way it goes nowadays. Can love be as personal on the internet? It's a whole new way of living and loving. This is a unique 5-7-5 and illustrated well. Marilyn

 Comment Written 17-May-2017

reply by the author on 20-May-2017
    Yes a whole new vista -thanks for the critique zanya
Comment from KyColonel Randal
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Thank you for sharing. This is a nice senryu. This poem appears to have the correct syllable count to meet the criteria of the contest you have entered. Good luck with your contest entry.

 Comment Written 15-May-2017

reply by the author on 20-May-2017
    Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from lyenochka
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Cool picture which gives me an idea of what "cyber blooms" look like. Or is blooms a verb and love is blooming? Good alliteration with "wooing on the web."

 Comment Written 15-May-2017

reply by the author on 20-May-2017
    Thanks for the critique zanya