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A Tweet From The Other Woman

He hadn't called for a few days when she got the news.

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Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Don.
Well, I guess she isn't too mad at him for remarrying, although she doesn't look too happy. I think I saw that you placed in this contest. Congratulations. Marilyn

 Comment Written 15-May-2017

Comment from Sylvia Page
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Oh well, well, "Married again, John?
I'm finished with you, you creep!
The same time next week?" Ah ha, so we go out again?
Love it,
Good luck in the contest!
Sylvia

 Comment Written 13-May-2017

Comment from marybell1
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I loved your poem "A Tweet From The Other Woman".
All your lines and syllables were correct. I think your photo tells the story.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 13-May-2017

Comment from Nikki-Nicole
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This poem is funny.
It consists of three lines that contain a syllable count: 5-7-5
The artwork looks good. The photo shown is a good match for this poem. The background color goes well with the art.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Senryu.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 13-May-2017