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Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "When Rain Obscures the Light"poems from Picture This Challenge
41 total reviews
Comment from MelB
Hi Sandra, excellent rhyme, rhythm, meter, and flow. I felt sorry for this poor guy. I wonder where his love went and why she disappeared or left him.
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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Hi Sandra, excellent rhyme, rhythm, meter, and flow. I felt sorry for this poor guy. I wonder where his love went and why she disappeared or left him.
Comment Written 13-May-2017
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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Thank you so much, Melissa. I'm really pleased you liked my take on the picture. I've been out of it for so long, it was nice to get into it again. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
It's fun to read all the different entries of the Picture This challenge. I didn't know it was still going. Nice picture and your poem is well written.
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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Hello, my friend,
It's fun to read all the different entries of the Picture This challenge. I didn't know it was still going. Nice picture and your poem is well written.
Comment Written 12-May-2017
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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Mine is a bit late, but yes, it's still going. I've been out of it for a few weeks, (months!) but back now. Thank you for reading it, and for the nice words. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A really good poem for this challenge, Sandra.
-Excellent rhyme, meter, imagery,
and story about this man.
-I like the comparison of his feelings
to his walking in the rain and the love
no longer in his life.
-She had been the joy in his life, then
"His love had gone away, he knew not where, or even why"
-The last four lines are so vivid and so sad, as well.
-An excellent job in depicting this man, Sandra.
-So glad to see you on FS.
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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-A really good poem for this challenge, Sandra.
-Excellent rhyme, meter, imagery,
and story about this man.
-I like the comparison of his feelings
to his walking in the rain and the love
no longer in his life.
-She had been the joy in his life, then
"His love had gone away, he knew not where, or even why"
-The last four lines are so vivid and so sad, as well.
-An excellent job in depicting this man, Sandra.
-So glad to see you on FS.
Comment Written 12-May-2017
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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Bless your heart, dear Pam, thank you so much for all those lovely stars, they do look amazing, and another thank you for the wonderful review. I'm back now, properly, and I've started the sequel. I have had Mildred chewing my ear for too long now, so I really had to make a start. Big hugs, my dear friend, I've missed you too! :) Sandra xxx
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You are very welcome for the stars and review, Sandra. "Oh, Lordy, Miss Sandra, we're going to be back on FS." Glad to hear that news and see what you will have in store for us. 🙂 Have a good day. Will be raining for most of it here.
Comment from rspoet
Hello Sandra,
I knew you'd sneak a little romance in there
even if it is only one stanza
If she left, somehow it seems his efforts are in vain
but still he walks and searches
Almost sonnet-like in the structure of the poem
with splendid mystery obscuring the final couplet
A very fine interpretation of the art work
Good to see you posting again, my friend
Very well done
RS (Robert)
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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Hello Sandra,
I knew you'd sneak a little romance in there
even if it is only one stanza
If she left, somehow it seems his efforts are in vain
but still he walks and searches
Almost sonnet-like in the structure of the poem
with splendid mystery obscuring the final couplet
A very fine interpretation of the art work
Good to see you posting again, my friend
Very well done
RS (Robert)
Comment Written 12-May-2017
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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Thank you so very much, dear Robert, for the lovely 6 stars. It was wonderful to wake up and read your review, and a great start to the day. I've started the sequel now, only because Mildred kept on at me! I'll post it once I have a few parts ready. I'm delighted you enjoyed my poem, I will keep those up too. Big hugs, my friend! :) Sandra xxx
Comment from lyenochka
This goes well with the picture and so eloquently told of a grieving person who seeks his beloved at a time when the weather suits his emotional state of being.
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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This goes well with the picture and so eloquently told of a grieving person who seeks his beloved at a time when the weather suits his emotional state of being.
Comment Written 12-May-2017
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, my friend. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. :) Sandra xx
Comment from Curly Girly
This is a beautiful, sad poem. You have created a superb piece here, Sandra. I don't think anyone can better this entry. I can think of no improvements to offer. Best wishes in the contest!
Nicole.
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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This is a beautiful, sad poem. You have created a superb piece here, Sandra. I don't think anyone can better this entry. I can think of no improvements to offer. Best wishes in the contest!
Nicole.
Comment Written 12-May-2017
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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Hi Nicole! Long time so see, how are you? Thank you so much for the 6 stars, that is so nice of you. I'm delighted you enjoyed my poem. How are the lambs? They did look so cute. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes, my friend, this is well written you used the picture very well bringing the character to life well done my friend I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 12-May-2017
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Yes, my friend, this is well written you used the picture very well bringing the character to life well done my friend I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 12-May-2017
reply by the author on 12-May-2017
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Thank you so much, Jill. I'm delighted you enjoyed this challenge of mine. Did you write one? I had a look, but couldn't find it. I'm off to bed now. Big hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from frogbook
Well worth waiting for my friend. This is great -so sad and melancholy. Wonder where that woman went? A wonderful write with fantastic form and rhyme. Loved it.
reply by the author on 12-May-2017
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Well worth waiting for my friend. This is great -so sad and melancholy. Wonder where that woman went? A wonderful write with fantastic form and rhyme. Loved it.
Comment Written 12-May-2017
reply by the author on 12-May-2017
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What a lovely review thank you so very much! And a humungous hug for the 6 stars, my dear friend! On a Friday too!! The picture of the man in the rain looked so sad, so I went with it. I'm really pleased you liked it, thank you! :) Sandra xxx
Comment from dragonpoet
This sonnet tells the sad story about what lost love can do to some people. Either she lost a wonderful man who loved her or a man who maybe was too obsessed by her that he scared her away. He should move on and find someone else.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 12-May-2017
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This sonnet tells the sad story about what lost love can do to some people. Either she lost a wonderful man who loved her or a man who maybe was too obsessed by her that he scared her away. He should move on and find someone else.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 12-May-2017
reply by the author on 12-May-2017
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Ahh, we'll never know, my friend! LOL, thank you so much, dragonpoet, for you lovely review of my poem. :) Sandra xxx
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My pleasure, Sandra.
Joan
Comment from l.raven
HI Sandra, you are never late...smile...when love is true sweet girl...it's hard to walk away...and you may never find it again...so very sad....I love your poem you...and a great challenge picture...very well written ...always...love you so Linda xxoo
have missed you...how are things going????...I hope and pray better for Ian and Sarah...and for you...this is a lot to take on...but I know it will work out...God is with you all...miss and love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 12-May-2017
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HI Sandra, you are never late...smile...when love is true sweet girl...it's hard to walk away...and you may never find it again...so very sad....I love your poem you...and a great challenge picture...very well written ...always...love you so Linda xxoo
have missed you...how are things going????...I hope and pray better for Ian and Sarah...and for you...this is a lot to take on...but I know it will work out...God is with you all...miss and love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 12-May-2017
reply by the author on 12-May-2017
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Hi Linda, I was thinking of you today, how are you? I'll pm you in a minute. Thank you so much for this lovely review, my dear friend, and for the shiny 6 stars. I've started writing again and made a start on my sequel, so you will see a bit more of me soon. I've missed you too. Love you lots, my friend. Big hugs. Sandra xxxxxx
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love ya too sweet girl...I PM you as well...I'm waiting for the sequel...doing much better...big love and smiles to you...xxoo Linda
