Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A befitting poem for this picture Patricia, in storms we find the way and you trusted and found solice, wise faithful words here, a wonderful read, best wishes Dolly x

 Comment Written 12-May-2017

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reply by the author on 12-May-2017

Thank you for the lovely review, Dolly.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written uplifting poem and a great interpretation of the 'picture this' challenge. Most of us was lost in the darkness before we find the light of God.

 Comment Written 12-May-2017

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reply by the author on 12-May-2017

Thank you for the lovely review, Sandra.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Patricia, This is a very well written poem to the Challenge this picture. You used very good wording and I liked the way you brought in the rain with the storms of life, Great job. Teri

 Comment Written 12-May-2017

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reply by the author on 12-May-2017

Thank you for the lovely review, Teri.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I admired your dramatic artwork selection to highlight the mood of your spiritual poem. Your rhymes add to the intensity of your message. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 11-May-2017

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reply by the author on 12-May-2017

Thank you for the lovely review, Joan.

Comment from Caressa_08

Exceptional

With all the rain that has come down this Spring in the Midwest, and where I live... just left relatives that were living around floods...and property is threatened if it rains even more like it did with the bad rain storms with tornadoes again last night near my house...Like in our life and all the storms ( all types) that can come, your poem is reassuring that He is still there no matter what, and truly cares & is there to comfort us.

Thanks for sharing...Caressa_08

 Comment Written 11-May-2017

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reply by the author on 12-May-2017

Thank you for the lovely review, Caressa. We could surely use some of that rain.

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes, my friend, this is well written my friend a beautiful accompaniment to this picture showing a persons faith well-done regards Jill

 Comment Written 11-May-2017

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reply by the author on 12-May-2017

Thank you for the lovely review, Jill.

Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Excellent

Hi Patricia. I've enjoyed reading the different postings for this particular 'Picture This' challenge. It's so interesting to see where each author's mind takes them. Yours took you to your faith and you wrote an excellent poem interpreting and expanding on what you see in this picture.

"For you are there to show me you care" ... this is my favorite part of your poem. Often in life we just need to know that someone cares. Well done! -- Connie

 Comment Written 10-May-2017

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reply by the author on 10-May-2017

Thanks for the lovely review, Connie.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is very nicely composed, Patricia. I enjoyed reading it. An excellent post for the Picture This group. The first and last stanzas are the best for me. Great job. Marilyn

 Comment Written 10-May-2017

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reply by the author on 10-May-2017

Thanks for the lovely review, Marilyn.

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

I find it so inspiring that your faith continues to grow with each day. There doesn't seem to be anything that trips and causes you to stumble on your journey. I enjoyed this one very much.

 Comment Written 10-May-2017

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reply by the author on 10-May-2017

Thanks for the lovely review, Sasha.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Good message, Patricia. But I'm not sure what the 5-8-17 means. I do like the overall message that in trials and difficulties, people can find the Savior and rest in Him in all their future trials.

 Comment Written 10-May-2017

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reply by the author on 10-May-2017

Thanks for the lovely review. Always appreciate your thoughts.