Raindrops of your soul
Tears16 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
It's beautiful Waves...I love the thought of teardrops being raindrops to your soul...they truly are...I hate to see anyone cry...sigh...love your poem you...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 12-May-2017
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It's beautiful Waves...I love the thought of teardrops being raindrops to your soul...they truly are...I hate to see anyone cry...sigh...love your poem you...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 12-May-2017
reply by the author on 12-May-2017
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Thankyou so much Linda I really appreciate this.
xdip
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soooooooo welcome you...xxoo love
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and good poem you have penned my friend. Some times it feels really good to shed some tears. You used very good wording and great imagery through your words. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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This is a very interesting and good poem you have penned my friend. Some times it feels really good to shed some tears. You used very good wording and great imagery through your words. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-May-2017
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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Yes it does Teri Thank you for the great review
dip
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I hope you have a great evening with your family! Teri
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
What a beautiful expression my friend raindrops of your soul, tears are shed for so many reasons at times it doesn't mean your sad well-done regards Jill
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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What a beautiful expression my friend raindrops of your soul, tears are shed for so many reasons at times it doesn't mean your sad well-done regards Jill
Comment Written 09-May-2017
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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Thankyou so much Jill I am glad you liked it
dip
Comment from TAB_that's me
Oh I let the emotions flow quite frequently. They do have a bit of a cleansing effect. They are indeed revealing. Good job Dip.
teresa
reply by the author on 08-May-2017
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Oh I let the emotions flow quite frequently. They do have a bit of a cleansing effect. They are indeed revealing. Good job Dip.
teresa
Comment Written 08-May-2017
reply by the author on 08-May-2017
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Thankyou so much Teresa much appreciated. I am glad you liked the poem.
dip
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. Tears do cleanse the soul, it is also known as a prayer to God when he have too much pain to find the right words to talk to God.
reply by the author on 08-May-2017
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A very well-written poem. Tears do cleanse the soul, it is also known as a prayer to God when he have too much pain to find the right words to talk to God.
Comment Written 08-May-2017
reply by the author on 08-May-2017
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Thankyou Sandra much appreciated as always. Thankyou for the religious association.
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Comment from Pantygynt
I have not heard it before. I wouldn't class it as a cliche -- yet. It is the sort of poetic remark that could easily become one. This little piece is another gem from down under. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-May-2017
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I have not heard it before. I wouldn't class it as a cliche -- yet. It is the sort of poetic remark that could easily become one. This little piece is another gem from down under. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-May-2017
reply by the author on 08-May-2017
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Yep its another dipism. If you can have Pantyisms I can have dipisms lol
Thanks Panty as always
dip
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is very sentimental and heartwarming, tears are shed for a reason and it is a release valve to heal us, your poem was a joy to read, great rhyming words and flow Dip, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-May-2017
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This is very sentimental and heartwarming, tears are shed for a reason and it is a release valve to heal us, your poem was a joy to read, great rhyming words and flow Dip, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-May-2017
reply by the author on 08-May-2017
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Thankyou so much Dolly much appreciated as always.
dip
Comment from Thal1959
In response to your author's note - the cliché is "The eyes are the windows to the soul." So this makes the lines, "Tears are the windows to your soul, I love that cliché , I love its feeling," a little flimsy. You compare tears in the first line as raindrops of the soul. Naturally, raindrops fall upon windows - so there is a metaphor in there somewhere that could have been used in the last stanza - though I can't come up with one right now.
reply by the author on 08-May-2017
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In response to your author's note - the cliché is "The eyes are the windows to the soul." So this makes the lines, "Tears are the windows to your soul, I love that cliché , I love its feeling," a little flimsy. You compare tears in the first line as raindrops of the soul. Naturally, raindrops fall upon windows - so there is a metaphor in there somewhere that could have been used in the last stanza - though I can't come up with one right now.
Comment Written 08-May-2017
reply by the author on 08-May-2017
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Thanks Thal for your thorough interpretation and enlightenment I always appreciate your input no matter what
dip
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It is always my pleasure to mess with you, D.
Comment from Mustang Patty
If our eyes are the windows to our soul, then it would stand to reason that our tears would be the raindrops that patter against the window. Your analogy is sound and well worth writing about. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
reply by the author on 08-May-2017
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If our eyes are the windows to our soul, then it would stand to reason that our tears would be the raindrops that patter against the window. Your analogy is sound and well worth writing about. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
Comment Written 08-May-2017
reply by the author on 08-May-2017
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Thankyou so much Patty much appreciated as always
dip
Comment from Asem.inspirations
The anology is a beautiful one and it certainly made for a beautiful poem. I never heard this before but it was probably said in some other book or poem. I really just started doing so much reading here in Fan Story. Before Fan Story I only had time to read my spiritual information and the mommy letters from school or employment stuff so I'm glad I saw it first in your poem. great poem!
reply by the author on 08-May-2017
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The anology is a beautiful one and it certainly made for a beautiful poem. I never heard this before but it was probably said in some other book or poem. I really just started doing so much reading here in Fan Story. Before Fan Story I only had time to read my spiritual information and the mommy letters from school or employment stuff so I'm glad I saw it first in your poem. great poem!
Comment Written 08-May-2017
reply by the author on 08-May-2017
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I am glad you are enjoying FanStory there are some wonderful poets and so diverse in styles and writes. Thankyou for commenting
dip
