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Warm words

For Dad

15 total reviews 
Comment from l.raven
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HI Waves, I am lucky and blessed to still have my mom and dad...they are married 63 years this year...and you are so right...if they are still with us...show them how much you love them...I love your poem you...and a priceless picture my friend...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 09-May-2017


reply by the author on 09-May-2017
    Thankyou as always Linda. Hey linda I have entered a poem competition on another site.

    Is there a special poem I've written about romance that you feel worthy of entering with.?

    much appreciated Dip
reply by l.raven on 09-May-2017
    what site???? I can't enter a poem in you have written...but I will go see one of my favorites...sooooooooo welcome you...xxoo love
reply by the author on 10-May-2017
    no i didn't want you to enter it just message me with a poem in my archives that you feel is worthy of entering a competition

    xxdip
reply by l.raven on 11-May-2017
    I'll pm you...
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Bravo, my friend, this is well-written dads sometimes get a bad press and are often not appreciated I know that my dad means the world to me well done my friend I enjoyed regards Jill

 Comment Written 08-May-2017


reply by the author on 08-May-2017
    Thankyou so much for the wonderful 6 my friend it means a lot to me.Yeah Dads are so special. Not everyone has a good relationship with their Dads so we are lucky hey.

    dip
reply by Mrs Happy Poet on 08-May-2017
    yes we are
Comment from closetpoetjester
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I understand you miss your Dad. Mine wasn't nearly as fit as yours (he was partially disabled) but we still had a deep connection and I miss him terribly.

A thoughtfully constructed poem, somewhat like the image of your Dad there who looked deep in thought at the time. I think he was sizing up a big tree that the missus wanted him to cut down LOL

Great poem, friend. Your special love is evident. I'm sure he's shining down on you from somewhere.

P

 Comment Written 07-May-2017


reply by the author on 07-May-2017
    This was a shot of Dad at 65 years old he is brick veneering the family home at the time of the shot

    Thanks so much P how is the publishing thingy going?

    xdip
reply by closetpoetjester on 07-May-2017
    LOL Well I was close.
    He was obviously taking in his handiwork or taking a deep breath before he set to with those bricks LOL

    Publishing thingy going great thanks.
    It's coming together.

    I'd love some feedback on a page.

    Mainly on how it's set out and whether it looks user friendly enough and uncluttered.

    It's the 10 Step page.
    The one YOU'LL be studying so you can get your shite togebbs

    haha
    xx
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
    give me the link again I will check it out

    xxdip
reply by closetpoetjester on 08-May-2017
    Thanks sweets
    x
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reply by closetpoetjester on 08-May-2017
    I emailed you...lemme know if you get it
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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An excellent poem. Who's the hunk in the picture? It looks like Swartzanger pumping up for his next movie. Do you have and accent?

 Comment Written 07-May-2017


reply by the author on 07-May-2017
    Thomas that is my Dad at 65 he was brick veneering our house when this shot was taken. He was a weapon lol
    No we are Full blooded Australians though Dads grandfather came from the cape Verde Islands off the coast of West africa

    thanks for the warm words much appreciated

    dip
Comment from Teri7
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Dip, This is truly a sweet and nice poem you have penned for and about your dad. I can't understand that as my dad abused me and it was not the best relationship, but I am over that now. Very good wording and great imagery. Is that a picture of your dad? Great job my friend! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 07-May-2017


reply by the author on 07-May-2017
    Yeah that's Dad at 65 brick veneering our house. Thankyou for the great review as always Teri

    dip
Comment from Asem.inspirations
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So sorry about the loss of your dad. It's great that you have the good memories. Some of us are still trying to build those memories with our dads. I know it's important, I just have to make the time. I will start calling him every Sunday. Your poem reminded me just how important this is while he is still with us. He is 84 years old and strong as an ox.

Thank you, this poem is beautiful.

 Comment Written 07-May-2017


reply by the author on 07-May-2017
    Tier you always make me feel good about my writes. Thankyou so much for your continued support.

    dip
Comment from Irish Rain
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What a lovely tribute to your father Mr. Dip. Mine died 29 years ago, too young, so much I never said to him. Hopefully others will read your poem, and not make the same mistake. Blessings...

 Comment Written 07-May-2017


reply by the author on 07-May-2017
    Thankyou so much Irish much appreciated.

    dip
Comment from Sis Cat
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Thank you, Dip, for writing your poem for those out here who have lost their fathers or those who still have a dad to love everyday. I wrote a couple of poems myself about my father after his passing.

I love the tenderness and the unconditional love which flows in your tribute. "I hold his plaque with loving care" made me recall the tender emotions I feel when I hold my father's awards. Another strong line is when you hope your memories of your father never fade away. I know this feeling exactly.

Your poem is well rhymed, deeply felt, and highly crafted.

Thank you for sharing your heart in your universal message.

 Comment Written 07-May-2017


reply by the author on 07-May-2017
    Thankyou as always Andre i am glad it touched an emotion with you

    dip
Comment from Poetic Friend
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Ah, Dip, I love when you write about your father. Your words always so endearing. Everyone should have a father as yours. I can't wait to read your father's day poem. Well, this one reads like one.

Thank you for sharing, my friend. Enjoy your week!

 Comment Written 07-May-2017


reply by the author on 07-May-2017
    Mother's day first. Next Sunday in Australia actually i have a mother's day trilogy to post

    dip
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi dip; thank you for sharing your warm sentiments about your dad. I'm glad you have such wonderful memories. I hope my own children feel that way about their father. My own dad was gone by the time I was twelve - never to be seen or heard from again,
~patty~

 Comment Written 07-May-2017


reply by the author on 07-May-2017
    That is sad Patty I had a good relationship with Dad Sure we had our arguments but were always resolved by the end of the day .

    Thankyou for the review

    dip