My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "True Happiness"a collection of my poetry
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Comment from Cindy Warren
I think love brings happiness. Not every day, of course, but where would we be without it? I don't think failure will crush anyone with a loving family.
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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I think love brings happiness. Not every day, of course, but where would we be without it? I don't think failure will crush anyone with a loving family.
Comment Written 06-May-2017
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Hi; I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. It was fun to write - the idea came to me as I was waking up yesterday. Thank you for your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~
Comment from lyenochka
Very cool use of this interesting format, Patty! I like the question. It's tricky to understand "true happiness." But truly happy people are just able to delight in all that God gives every day and finds joy not in things but God and people. Good question about "pursuit of it making us sick." Some have gotten very sick pursuing things that aren't happiness.
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Very cool use of this interesting format, Patty! I like the question. It's tricky to understand "true happiness." But truly happy people are just able to delight in all that God gives every day and finds joy not in things but God and people. Good question about "pursuit of it making us sick." Some have gotten very sick pursuing things that aren't happiness.
Comment Written 06-May-2017
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Hi; I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. It was fun to write - the idea came to me as I was waking up yesterday. Thank you for your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~
Comment from Thomas Bowling
I've found that most people are about as happy as they want to be. Two people can go through the same trials and tribulations and come away with totally different experiences.
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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I've found that most people are about as happy as they want to be. Two people can go through the same trials and tribulations and come away with totally different experiences.
Comment Written 06-May-2017
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Hi Thomas; I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. It was fun to write - the idea came to me as I was waking up yesterday. Thank you for your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~
Comment from lalajovanoski
this is a great example of a quantern poem. it is nicely written and asks some good questions. Thank you for sharing this as I truly enjoyed reading. God bless
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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this is a great example of a quantern poem. it is nicely written and asks some good questions. Thank you for sharing this as I truly enjoyed reading. God bless
Comment Written 06-May-2017
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Hi; I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. It was fun to write - the idea came to me as I was waking up yesterday. Thank you for your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Quatern you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
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reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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This is a very well written Quatern you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 06-May-2017
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Hi Teri; I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. It was fun to write - the idea came to me as I was waking up yesterday. Thank you for your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~
