Comment from emptypage

Excellent

Well, your narrator wouldn't be the first to settle things this way. Too bad.

You did well with the requirements of the Tyburn, though. Interesting.

 Comment Written 09-May-2017

Comment from MaggieF

Excellent

Great meanising picture. Maybe it's the picture or your straight to the point words but I found this poem extremely scary and threatening. It wasn't graphic I definitely feared for her life. Very clever. MaggieF

 Comment Written 09-May-2017

Comment from Thal1959

Excellent

Well written, though somewhat depressing. Must be about Jack the Ripper. Though I confess I don't know why the approach of dropping the "g" at the end of the key words. Not that it is a mistake - I just don't see the necessity for it.

 Comment Written 09-May-2017

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

What an excellent love revenge poem, great artwork and the notes ( explanation for this style is much appreciated good luck in your competition****kahpot

 Comment Written 09-May-2017

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Yikes. I hope you're slaughtering a pig. I guess you probably are in your own mind. Like my buddy said, she shouldn't have laughed.

 Comment Written 08-May-2017

Comment from lalajovanoski

Excellent

I found this poem to be a great tyburn contest entry. good imagery and it also is nicely constructed. thanks for sharing this and best wishes in the contest

 Comment Written 08-May-2017

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written dark mysterious Tyburn. No one likes a lying and cheating person in their lives. The one way to get rid of this one is to calmly stabbing him out if your life.

 Comment Written 08-May-2017