My Best Pick-Up Line
8 word humorous poem10 total reviews
Comment from LucaFen4
Biologically, your poem is incorrect, you would weigh the same.
however, this is a poem, not biology class. cudo's for the cleverness 'inserted' with this one.
good luck in the contest.
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Biologically, your poem is incorrect, you would weigh the same.
however, this is a poem, not biology class. cudo's for the cleverness 'inserted' with this one.
good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-May-2017
Comment from nordicgirl
Well, I can`r stop laughing at this stupid thing, so I guess that means you have done what you have set out to do. I cannot believe I am voting for this. Ha!! NG
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Well, I can`r stop laughing at this stupid thing, so I guess that means you have done what you have set out to do. I cannot believe I am voting for this. Ha!! NG
Comment Written 03-May-2017
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Miguel,
you have the right amount of words and the context is comprehensible. The mental picture is disgusting, hahaha
I think the poem is funny. Good job!
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Hello, Miguel,
you have the right amount of words and the context is comprehensible. The mental picture is disgusting, hahaha
I think the poem is funny. Good job!
Comment Written 03-May-2017
Comment from XGoneX
Hi,
I
weigh 175 pounds ... 210 with an
erection!
Lol. This poem cracked me up. Very funny, and the picture complements the poem very well. You also follow the contest rules.
Good luck.
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Hi,
I
weigh 175 pounds ... 210 with an
erection!
Lol. This poem cracked me up. Very funny, and the picture complements the poem very well. You also follow the contest rules.
Good luck.
Comment Written 03-May-2017
Comment from Thomas Bowling
That guy needs a great pickup line and a mask. My best pick up line is. "Hi, I'm Tom." It works every time. The girls immediately fall for it.
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That guy needs a great pickup line and a mask. My best pick up line is. "Hi, I'm Tom." It works every time. The girls immediately fall for it.
Comment Written 03-May-2017
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahaha...
Okay, so where, exactly, does the additional blood come from to cause the erection that makes this dude's body heavier than he was before, hmmmm?
He's one a' those sex vamps, a guy who drinks the blood of his lady fair of the moment as he's balling her brains out.
Think "Fright Night."
Good luck, Michael.
Funny, lol...
~Dean
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Hahaha...
Okay, so where, exactly, does the additional blood come from to cause the erection that makes this dude's body heavier than he was before, hmmmm?
He's one a' those sex vamps, a guy who drinks the blood of his lady fair of the moment as he's balling her brains out.
Think "Fright Night."
Good luck, Michael.
Funny, lol...
~Dean
Comment Written 03-May-2017
Comment from emptypage
Hahahaha... you wish!! Hell, I WISH!!
I love the image; it is priceless.
Your poem? Too clever by far.
Now I have to wonder: Are you male or female?
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Hahahaha... you wish!! Hell, I WISH!!
I love the image; it is priceless.
Your poem? Too clever by far.
Now I have to wonder: Are you male or female?
Comment Written 03-May-2017
Comment from tfawcus
A thirty five pounder no less! What a catch. I have heard a few fisherman's tales in my time, but this one beats them all. It seems that weight, like time, is flexible.
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A thirty five pounder no less! What a catch. I have heard a few fisherman's tales in my time, but this one beats them all. It seems that weight, like time, is flexible.
Comment Written 03-May-2017
Comment from starkat
Although funny, your entry doesn't follow contest rules, which is only one word in the first line, six words in the second line, and one word in the last line.
It is funny to think your erection adds pounds to the body. You must get lots of girls who like the big ones.
Enjoyed your poem and pic of dorky guy still trying out pick-up lines on gullible girls.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers ... ;o)
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Although funny, your entry doesn't follow contest rules, which is only one word in the first line, six words in the second line, and one word in the last line.
It is funny to think your erection adds pounds to the body. You must get lots of girls who like the big ones.
Enjoyed your poem and pic of dorky guy still trying out pick-up lines on gullible girls.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers ... ;o)
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Glad you got a kick out of it.
Thanks for pointing out the rules. I'll fix it right away. :)) Anon
Comment from Mustang Patty
LOL!! Well, that would certainly make for a great opening line. I wonder if it would work. (I think I might laugh too loud and crush the guy - or deflate him.)
The format for the contest is one word on one line, six on the next, and the last line is supposed to be one word - I think you have time to adjust this before the contest ends,
~patty~
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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LOL!! Well, that would certainly make for a great opening line. I wonder if it would work. (I think I might laugh too loud and crush the guy - or deflate him.)
The format for the contest is one word on one line, six on the next, and the last line is supposed to be one word - I think you have time to adjust this before the contest ends,
~patty~
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Oh. Thanks so much for pointing that out. I should read the rules. LOL
Laughing out loud would be fine as long as you didn't slap me, it's all good. HA!
Anon
