Issues of Life
...guard your heart13 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Right on! I love how you kept up with the rhyming pentameter AND looped from stanza to stanza. I've seen some not loop from one stanza to the next. So bravo for your form and thank you for the great message of how God guides us from difficulties and hurt into mercy, forgiveness and peace!!
reply by the author on 05-May-2017
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Right on! I love how you kept up with the rhyming pentameter AND looped from stanza to stanza. I've seen some not loop from one stanza to the next. So bravo for your form and thank you for the great message of how God guides us from difficulties and hurt into mercy, forgiveness and peace!!
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 05-May-2017
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Helen,
Thank you for your review and very kind comments. This is one challenge I took upon myself that was very difficult. You would not believe how many times I had to make changes to make the flow of every word work to ensure the message would be understood. Thanks so much for your continued support. Lots of love.....Portia
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your entry for the Loop Poetry contest. Your lines follow the required repeating words, and the tale you tell is one of forgiveness and acceptance. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
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reply by the author on 05-May-2017
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thank you for sharing your entry for the Loop Poetry contest. Your lines follow the required repeating words, and the tale you tell is one of forgiveness and acceptance. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
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Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 05-May-2017
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Patty,
Thank you for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, as always they are greatly appreciated. Blessings my friend....Portia
Comment from Teri7
Portia, This is a really good Loop poem you have penned for the contest. You look as though you have been writing them left and right my friend! lol You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery with the art work. You followed instructions well. Best wishes in the contest. love, Teri
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reply by the author on 05-May-2017
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Portia, This is a really good Loop poem you have penned for the contest. You look as though you have been writing them left and right my friend! lol You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery with the art work. You followed instructions well. Best wishes in the contest. love, Teri
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Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 05-May-2017
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Teri,
Thanks sweetie for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. The penning of this Loop poem was quite difficult. You would not believe how many times I had to change words to make sure the message would be understood. This was quite a challenge. Your very kind words make it worthwhile. Blessings....Portia
