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The Mistake

What no one wants to happen.

12 total reviews 
Comment from BeasPeas
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Well, this is unique! I have to give you a five for this contest entry. What do they say? Quite a bit of information here? Still it does fulfill the requirement and I DO believe every farm did have one in days gone by. Marilyn

 Comment Written 04-May-2017

reply by the author on 05-May-2017
    Thank you so very much for your kind comments, it was just a fun inspirational thought.
Comment from donette1914
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lol this is too funny! wow! you made my day with liquid gas, the is such a fun piece and it gave me a good laugh. i love the artwork also. thankyou for sharing i hope you win the contest

 Comment Written 04-May-2017

reply by the author on 04-May-2017
    Thank you for your kind words and good luck wishes.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, my friend,

you have the right amount of words and the context is comprehensible. The picture is appropriate, I don't think the poem is funny, it's just disgusting.

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

reply by the author on 04-May-2017
    Oh I am so sorry it upset you, but I do thank you for reviewing and your honesty.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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Recently a friend of mine was commenting on a gas shortage I said I seem to have an unlimited supply of methane. I'd be glad to give you some.

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

reply by the author on 03-May-2017
    LOL that was so cute, thanks.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Well this write is certainly down to earth and fun! Our toilet experiences in 8 funny words! Gas indeed! As long as it is confined! Best of luck with the contest,love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

reply by the author on 03-May-2017
    Thank you for reading and reviewing. the kind comments and the good luck wishes.
Comment from XGoneX
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Hello,

POOP,
experiencing the urge to pass liquid
gas.

You describe in a funny way well the urgent need to go to the toilet. You also follow the contest rues.
Good luck. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

reply by the author on 03-May-2017
    Thank you for your kind comments and for your good luck wishes.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well- written eight words that is quite funny. Many of us had that experience one or other time. Luckily the most of the time it happens when we are alone. Lol.

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

reply by the author on 03-May-2017
    Thank you for your comments, I fully agree that we have all experiences and as you said we are lucky it happens when alone. I had a special now deceased friend in mind when I wrote this and he wasn't alone.
Comment from robyn corum
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Dear Mystery Author,

Well, you're right about no one wanting it to happen. *smile* nobody I know, anyway. Especially not the kind you seem to be describing...yuck! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

reply by the author on 03-May-2017
    Thank you for your kind comments and good luck wishes, I am glad it made you smile.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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This is funny. I am not usually into joke about toilet humour but it made me laugh and such a tight contest, well done and most amusing kindest regards Meia xx best of luck

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

reply by the author on 03-May-2017
    Thank you so much Meia for your kind comments, glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the good luck wishes.
Comment from rspoet
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This sums up many things in today's world
even the energy crisis
A renewable energy source
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contets

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

reply by the author on 03-May-2017
    Thank you for your kind comments and the good luck wishes.