Comment from Sankey

Excellent

Loved this, heaps. Sadly no pets here anymore for various reason. A very short beautiful read. I also loved the picture. I did not look to see if you took that yourself? Cheers.

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

Hi there; thank you for reading. Yes, I did take that picture myself - it was one of those rare moments when the dogs actually stayed in position and my camera was handy.
I appreciate your kind words,
~patty~

reply by Sankey on 02-May-2017

I loved it thanks.

Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

Mustangpatty,

The arrangement is formatted very well. The flow is very nice. Good chosen words.

Ah yes. Your lines have the correct count. Cute, cute puppies. We have kitty cats here. lol

Everything here is picture-perfect. What can I say?

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 02-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

Hi Camille; thank you so much for your time to read and review, I appreciate your warm comments and kind words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

They are precious Patty. Give them both a big hug for me.

Good job on your lune. Your syllable count is correct.

The picture is perfect & I love the colors, too.

Thanks for sharing a sweet poem. Jan

 Comment Written 01-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

Hi Jan; thank you so much for stopping by to read. I appreciate your comments and warm words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Wow this is so cute and a well done lune. I assume these are your new additions to your family? Ok, which is which and will we be seeing more of them in the future?

 Comment Written 01-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

Let me introduce Bernie on the left, and Howie on the right. I have been writing about the boys over the past few months. Bernie is a bit over two years old, and Howie is almost five. They are a constant source of inspiration, love and comfort,
~patty~

reply by Barb Hensongispsaca on 02-May-2017

Thank you for taking time to let me know. My cats are mine so i understand

reply by the author on 02-May-2017

Oh, I always have time to talk about my furry friends!
~p~

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for sharing the fun form and your doggies' hellos. The picture is adorable and reinforces your words perfectly. Big smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 01-May-2017

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reply by the author on 02-May-2017

Hi Joan; thank you so much for your time to read, review and comment. Your words are greatly appreciated,
~patty~

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

So very cute! Yes, I always hear such great stories about the big hearts of dogs and I believe them even though I prefer cats. Dogs are really giving creatures and so loyal.

 Comment Written 01-May-2017

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reply by the author on 01-May-2017

Hi; for years and years, I had cats. When my favorite died seven years ago, I went to the pound and adopted a dog. Now, I have two of the craziest, cuddliest fur babies I've ever known. Pretty sure I would be lost without them! Thanks for dropping by to read and review,
~patty~

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Patty, This is a great Lune poem about your little flurry babies. They are just so adorable. I loved reading your wording and the picture is just too cute! love, Teri

 Comment Written 01-May-2017

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reply by the author on 01-May-2017

Hi Teri; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I LOVE this picture of the boys - they actually stayed still long enough for me to get a good shot!
~patty~

Comment from Marvin Calloway

Exceptional

This seems like a tedious form to deal with, but you've mastered it successfully. It's difficult to resist smiling at the picture of your subject matter. I was certain I would enjoy the piece.
Fine work
Marv

 Comment Written 01-May-2017

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reply by the author on 01-May-2017

Hi Marv; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate the EXCEPTIONAL rating, and I'm proud you like the picture of my furry little boys,
~patty~

Comment from Aurora1

Excellent

Puppy love is fun. great big hearts, Giving forever.
JUST LIKE YOU!!!! no need to say anything more you have said it all.
Bernie and Howie are just adorable!

 Comment Written 01-May-2017

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reply by the author on 01-May-2017

Hi there; thank you so much for reviewing my latest dog poem. The boys actually stayed still for this shot - it was a good day,
~patty~

Comment from MelB

Excellent

Hi Patty, what a cute picture of Bernie and Howie! A nice poem you have written with excellent syllable count. They look like they do have big hearts.

 Comment Written 01-May-2017

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reply by the author on 01-May-2017

Hi Mel; thank you for stopping by to read and review. This was a fun little write about the furry boys.
~patty~