My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Lune to the Dogs"a collection of my poetry
63 total reviews
Comment from Sanku
I know. dogs are our best friends .And they become very attached and stay loyal to us.(i am a cat lover though)
The picture is so cute and the poem is a tiny piece that says a lot.
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
I know. dogs are our best friends .And they become very attached and stay loyal to us.(i am a cat lover though)
The picture is so cute and the poem is a tiny piece that says a lot.
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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thank you for your lovely review. I used to think of myself as more of a 'cat person' having had cats for most of my life. The truth is, I consider my dogs - cats in doggy costumes.
~patty~
Comment from amahra
I love puppies, they're so cute. First, let me say, this is a beautiful art work that you have chosen for this writing. I love the choice of words, and the rhythmic beat. Great job, my dear.
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
I love puppies, they're so cute. First, let me say, this is a beautiful art work that you have chosen for this writing. I love the choice of words, and the rhythmic beat. Great job, my dear.
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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thank you so much for reading and reviewing this piece. The picture is one that I took of my dogs - I'm glad you like it. Hard to believe they sat long enough for me to get the shot! I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
Good job with the syllable count and poetic form. I can tell you love your doggies :) the picture is adorable. Is it your picture? Well done.
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
Hello, my friend,
Good job with the syllable count and poetic form. I can tell you love your doggies :) the picture is adorable. Is it your picture? Well done.
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Hi Gypsy; yes the picture is mine. The pair of rowdy little dogs actually sat still long enough for me to capture this shot. I so appreciate your review,
~patty~
Comment from Gert sherwood
Ah patty such fun lune poem to read and review
love it I know that wonderful feeling of puppy love
when our Tasha ( a husky) had her first liter of five puppies
Smiles
Gert
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
Ah patty such fun lune poem to read and review
love it I know that wonderful feeling of puppy love
when our Tasha ( a husky) had her first liter of five puppies
Smiles
Gert
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Hi Gert; thank you for your lovely review of this piece. I appreciate your kind words and I'm excited to hear about puppies!! I've never had the experience of having little puppies fill the house,
~patty~
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
My dog Buffy is my life, she is permanently a puppy, always mistaken for one, I love your poem it is joyful and brings home the wonder of canine love well done kind regards Meia x
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
My dog Buffy is my life, she is permanently a puppy, always mistaken for one, I love your poem it is joyful and brings home the wonder of canine love well done kind regards Meia x
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Hi Meia; thank you so much for your time to read and review. I can totally relate to your relationship with Buffy - Howie and Bernie are my closest friends,
~patty~
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
A puppy is everywhere and mostly to many is fun and puppy love would be obvious fun as here the poet shares experience of feeling the joy of appreciating puppies giving hallo.
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
A puppy is everywhere and mostly to many is fun and puppy love would be obvious fun as here the poet shares experience of feeling the joy of appreciating puppies giving hallo.
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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thank you for your review
Comment from sheena121
A very nice poem and the words are so true. A good choice of words not an easy thing to do with such few syllables and lines and I love the pictue, the doggies are so cute. Well done.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
A very nice poem and the words are so true. A good choice of words not an easy thing to do with such few syllables and lines and I love the pictue, the doggies are so cute. Well done.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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thank you for your kind review. Bernie and Howie are really hams when it comes to taking pictures,
~patty~
Comment from Mastery
Outstanding Lune, Patty. Unique in it's theme I think. One could also relate it to two young people falling in love for the first time, I think. Their hearts swell also if I remember correctly. LOL
Blessings, Bob
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
Outstanding Lune, Patty. Unique in it's theme I think. One could also relate it to two young people falling in love for the first time, I think. Their hearts swell also if I remember correctly. LOL
Blessings, Bob
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Hi Bob; thank you so much for reading and reviewing this piece. I appreciate your comments,
~patty~
Comment from TAB_that's me
awww, how sweet - both the picture and the poem. They do have big hearts and lots of love. They only want love and attention in return.
teresa
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
awww, how sweet - both the picture and the poem. They do have big hearts and lots of love. They only want love and attention in return.
teresa
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Hi teresa; thank you for your time to read and review. I appreciate your kind words,
~patty~
Comment from Thomas Bowling
I think your puppies need to stop ordering their clothes online. This looks like my wife after she bought a dress from China. She ordered her size. Maybe she should have told them there was only one of her.
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
I think your puppies need to stop ordering their clothes online. This looks like my wife after she bought a dress from China. She ordered her size. Maybe she should have told them there was only one of her.
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Hi Thomas; thank you for your insightful review. I told the dogs I'm cancelling their credit card - they stole mine!
~patty~