My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Lune to the Dogs"a collection of my poetry
63 total reviews
Comment from mbroyles2
How adorable.
They look right at home inside that blankey.
Great poem in the style of a lune.
I learn so much about poetry when reading your work.
Lovely work!
Michael
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
How adorable.
They look right at home inside that blankey.
Great poem in the style of a lune.
I learn so much about poetry when reading your work.
Lovely work!
Michael
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Hi Michael; thank you so much for your review of this little poem. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~
Comment from rtobaygo
Good afternoon, Patty
Yes, one feels a special love, a bond with puppies. Their innocence, the fact they see everyday as Christmas makes them special (read the latter part from a book on dog psychology. Enjoyed.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
PS: Forgot to thank you for serving!
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
Good afternoon, Patty
Yes, one feels a special love, a bond with puppies. Their innocence, the fact they see everyday as Christmas makes them special (read the latter part from a book on dog psychology. Enjoyed.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
PS: Forgot to thank you for serving!
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Hi Ray; thank you so much. Serving was my pleasure - and my stories and poems about the dogs are a great treasure for me to write.
~patty~
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes, my friend, this is well written having pets as part of a family is rewarding for everyone they are truly man's best friend sorry I am behind playing catch up regards Jill
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
Yes, my friend, this is well written having pets as part of a family is rewarding for everyone they are truly man's best friend sorry I am behind playing catch up regards Jill
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Hey Jill; I don't mind if you're playing 'catch up,' I simply appreciate you taking the time to read and review my posts.
~patty~
Comment from TPAC
I feel your statement. Innocence having no responsibility or cares to consider does make big hearts. Nice way to convey such a feeling, in my opinion of this write.
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
I feel your statement. Innocence having no responsibility or cares to consider does make big hearts. Nice way to convey such a feeling, in my opinion of this write.
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your opinion of this piece of poetry.
~patty~
Comment from Joycee
Puppy love is fun and enjoyable because there is no judging for anyone. Animals are great that way. They love us for being in their lives and asking only for love.
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
Puppy love is fun and enjoyable because there is no judging for anyone. Animals are great that way. They love us for being in their lives and asking only for love.
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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thank you so much for your time to read and review this piece. Bernie and Howie certainly make my days and you're right - all they ask for is love (and my pillow.) LOL!
~patty~
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A beautiful feel good write, puppies are such fun and give us so much pleasure from their 'Great big hearts', a fabulous write Patty, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
A beautiful feel good write, puppies are such fun and give us so much pleasure from their 'Great big hearts', a fabulous write Patty, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Hi Dolly; thank you so much for the warm review. Your words of encouragement mean a great deal,
~patty~
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Puppy love is fun
Great big hearts
Giving forever
such a simple little poem, but the words speaks volumes and the picture is so adorable - I want one ... please.
Margaret
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
Puppy love is fun
Great big hearts
Giving forever
such a simple little poem, but the words speaks volumes and the picture is so adorable - I want one ... please.
Margaret
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Hi Margaret; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. Your comments on my poem make me smile - but No, you cannot have either Bernie or Howie! (LOL!)
~patty~
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That's not fair - you have two and I've none at all. Can I just borrow one then?
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hmmm - which do you want? The one that has a funny little growl when he plays OR the one that follows you everywhere you go?
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Both
Comment from dmt1967
I love the picture and the way you have matched their blanket to the background colour, very cleverly done. I liked the font used as well as the wording of this delightful little poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
I love the picture and the way you have matched their blanket to the background colour, very cleverly done. I liked the font used as well as the wording of this delightful little poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem. I'm glad you liked it and appreciate you noticing that the blanket matched the background - I had fun working with the color wheel!
~patty~
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Patty - this is a lovely Lune poem. Correct in structure, 5/3/5, and the words are so true, especially 'great big hearts'. Friends that will never let you down. Loved this. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
Hi Patty - this is a lovely Lune poem. Correct in structure, 5/3/5, and the words are so true, especially 'great big hearts'. Friends that will never let you down. Loved this. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Hi Dorothy; thank you so much for your lovely review of this piece. I appreciate your kind words and comments,
~patty~
Comment from smileycloud
You not wrong there.
Lovely happy smiley piece of poetry.
3 5 3 is very much to the point and precise.
Good work.
Luck to you in contest
Have a smiley day
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
You not wrong there.
Lovely happy smiley piece of poetry.
3 5 3 is very much to the point and precise.
Good work.
Luck to you in contest
Have a smiley day
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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thank you for stopping by to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed the piece,
~patty~