Perennials of War
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Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Another well written chapter, Barbara - stirring the imagination.
Shana's right - it is a little too casual to be thinking of sandwiches
when her life might be in danger.
Margaret
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Another well written chapter, Barbara - stirring the imagination.
Shana's right - it is a little too casual to be thinking of sandwiches
when her life might be in danger.
Margaret
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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I appreciate the kind review.
Comment from ciliverde
I kind of agree with Shana that they seem to treat serious matters rather casually. Or maybe Anderson is confident that they don't have to worry? What are finger sandwiches? They don't sound very substantial.
Carol
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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I kind of agree with Shana that they seem to treat serious matters rather casually. Or maybe Anderson is confident that they don't have to worry? What are finger sandwiches? They don't sound very substantial.
Carol
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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I appreciate the kind review. They are very small, usually crustless.
Comment from LaRosa
I feel I'm in the room!
Not having read past chapters, I did wonder about 'finger sandwiches' for grown men. Then, reading more, I really felt badly for Shana. She had to feel betrayed at that moment.
Looking forward to more!
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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I feel I'm in the room!
Not having read past chapters, I did wonder about 'finger sandwiches' for grown men. Then, reading more, I really felt badly for Shana. She had to feel betrayed at that moment.
Looking forward to more!
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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I appreciate the kind review.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This is an interesting read.
Well-written chapter.
Nicely polished.
Formatted correctly.
Good dialogue.
I appreciate the recap of the previous chapter.
Also, the author's notes are very much appreciated.
Thanks for sharing another part of your book.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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This is an interesting read.
Well-written chapter.
Nicely polished.
Formatted correctly.
Good dialogue.
I appreciate the recap of the previous chapter.
Also, the author's notes are very much appreciated.
Thanks for sharing another part of your book.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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I appreciate the kind review.
Comment from light
Well, I can see why Shana thought it was a little to casual to be thinking about finger sandwiches when her life might be in jeopardy. I hope they get some answers from Jeremy.
Good chapter.
Elaine
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Well, I can see why Shana thought it was a little to casual to be thinking about finger sandwiches when her life might be in jeopardy. I hope they get some answers from Jeremy.
Good chapter.
Elaine
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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I hope they do too. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from DLBoo
This is very well written and I enjoy reading it very much. I seem to keep being hit by daja vu though as I read each chapter. It's as though I have read this book before or something so similar it's scary. I really hate to say that. Is this book already published? The suspense you have here make me want to continue reading to find out what happens next and see if I'm right or wrong in the direction it's going.
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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This is very well written and I enjoy reading it very much. I seem to keep being hit by daja vu though as I read each chapter. It's as though I have read this book before or something so similar it's scary. I really hate to say that. Is this book already published? The suspense you have here make me want to continue reading to find out what happens next and see if I'm right or wrong in the direction it's going.
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Please let me know where or who wrote it. As far as I know, this is completely a new idea. Now I am really worried. Thank you reading.
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I can understand that. I have a vast collection of books, I'll see if I can find the one I'm referring to. I'll get back to you as soon as I can Barbara.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend this is well written you move the story along well I am not surprised Shana is getting nervous because they are getting closer to the facts needed which means if they don't do things carefully she will be in the firing line but I think Anderson has things under control he is preparing for the meeting by writing down questions so no stone is left unturned well done I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Hello my friend this is well written you move the story along well I am not surprised Shana is getting nervous because they are getting closer to the facts needed which means if they don't do things carefully she will be in the firing line but I think Anderson has things under control he is preparing for the meeting by writing down questions so no stone is left unturned well done I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Another interesting instalment. I can see how Shana might be taken aback by the almost casual treatment of the mundane after such revelations though.
All the best
G
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Hi there,
Another interesting instalment. I can see how Shana might be taken aback by the almost casual treatment of the mundane after such revelations though.
All the best
G
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for sharing another fine chapter, short in comparison to most of those that others post on this site, but as always, leaving us readers anxiously waiting for the next. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thanks for sharing another fine chapter, short in comparison to most of those that others post on this site, but as always, leaving us readers anxiously waiting for the next. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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I appreciate the kind review.
Comment from MelB
Hi Barb, very good dialogue and the chapter flows well. Shana's confusion comes through well in this chapter. I found no spag. I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Hi Barb, very good dialogue and the chapter flows well. Shana's confusion comes through well in this chapter. I found no spag. I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
