Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

What we scribble as our thoughts emerge can be very profound and resonating as it is what's happening at the time and it is unique, great free verse poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017

Thanks for the great review and for your support of the poem. glad you enjoyed it estory

Comment from Tinkadoll

Excellent

Very cool and unique piece of work! The topic of scribbles is just so rare and works so well with this poem. I love how well it flows. This has a great balance of "scribbles" but also serious content.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017

Thanks for your great review and for your comments supporting the poem. it is really a poem about imagination and letting it take you away to all kinds of places estory

Comment from loismddavis

Excellent

this is a delightful example of free verse--an interesting description of a daydreamer and full of poetic elements--I like the alliteration. good job

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017

Thanks for enjoying this piece and supporting it so much. Glad you found it so enjoyable. It is a poem about imagination and letting it take you away to all kinds of places and feelings estory

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello estory
to me yes, you had day dreaming fun imaging pictures to put with you various scribbles ending up with your thoughts crumbled ending up into (lets say limbo)

Gert

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017

Thanks for the great review and for your comments supporting the poem estory

Comment from JDRBAR

Excellent

Half way down, long sentence. The word sentence is misspelled. Otherwise, I truly enjoyed reading this. It evoked many of my own scribbles while waiting for words to come to me, or waiting on the phone on that obnoxious hold button.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017

Thanks for the great review and for your supporting comments and suggestions. Glad you enjoyed this journey of imagination and letting it take you away to all kinds of places and ending up hanging in the air like a cloud estory

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

A very good poem.

Let's play a game. See if you can spot the snag:

Out of the tangled lines of tangled sentances;

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017

Thanks for the great review and for your suggestions. typed too fast and didn't use spellcheck estory

Comment from bmethner

Excellent

I liked your music with words. I actually followed your message, I think. I often jot things down here and there for ideas to write about and then of course lose them or at least the thought that brought them. The helter skelter words contributed to the meaning of the piece, and the music of it. I enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017

Thanks for the great review and for your support of the poem. it is really about imagination, and letting it take you to all kinds of places, all kinds of successes, and failures, and then hanging in the air like a cloud at the end estory

reply by bmethner on 30-Apr-2017

I enjoyed it.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

thank you for sharing this free verse poem. In my mind's eye, I could see the swirling and curling with tiny print on the page.
One nit: 'Out of the tangled lines of tangled sentances (sentences);'

I think this would be a fun way to write - well done,
~patty~

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017

Thank you for the great review and for your support of the poem. glad you enjoyed it so much estory