Seeing Behind the Eyes
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "The Waiting Room"A book of poems on people.
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Comment from honeytree
Great to read in everyway
When sadness is around
us when we are ill or
loved ones are ill cane be
a challenge within our lives.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Great to read in everyway
When sadness is around
us when we are ill or
loved ones are ill cane be
a challenge within our lives.
Honey tree
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you Annie:)
Comment from Joan E.
I imagined this evocative, free verse was written in a hospital, waiting room. I admired your "anchors" simile and "gallows" metaphor. Again, I am relieved that the prognosis was good and your tears can be wiped away. Hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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I imagined this evocative, free verse was written in a hospital, waiting room. I admired your "anchors" simile and "gallows" metaphor. Again, I am relieved that the prognosis was good and your tears can be wiped away. Hugs- Joan
Comment Written 30-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you so much Joan:) Greatly appreciated.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a remarkably accurate view of a doctor's waiting room, delivered in unmasked perfection. The random rhyme is well constructed and the movement, fluid and explicit...
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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In my opinion, a remarkably accurate view of a doctor's waiting room, delivered in unmasked perfection. The random rhyme is well constructed and the movement, fluid and explicit...
Comment Written 29-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you so much:)
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You are indeed welcome - such a relevant poem, for sure...
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
'The Waiting Room'- Very interesting title.
It reminds me of the hospital and doctor's office.
This is a good read.
--A waiting room can bring on fear of the worst. I'm glad everything turned out okay.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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'The Waiting Room'- Very interesting title.
It reminds me of the hospital and doctor's office.
This is a good read.
--A waiting room can bring on fear of the worst. I'm glad everything turned out okay.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 29-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you Nicole:)
Comment from Irish Rain
A beautiful ending, 'it was me.' I also really loved your description here of the defeated man. Awesome free verse. I am SO HAPPY the news was good!!! Blessings to you and your wife!!
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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A beautiful ending, 'it was me.' I also really loved your description here of the defeated man. Awesome free verse. I am SO HAPPY the news was good!!! Blessings to you and your wife!!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you so much my friend for the wonderful six stars:)
Comment from Bill O'Bier
This I think, is a very touching poem. I don't know anyone that can't relate to waiting for news about the outcome of some life changing moment. Thanks for sharing and describing this so eloquently. All the best to both of you.
Bill~
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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This I think, is a very touching poem. I don't know anyone that can't relate to waiting for news about the outcome of some life changing moment. Thanks for sharing and describing this so eloquently. All the best to both of you.
Bill~
Comment Written 29-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you for the wonderful gift of the six stars Bill:)
Comment from padumachitta
Hi
this made me cry and think of allthe pain I have seen while waiting for tests and results. It is the most scarey place in the world, these rooms. You caught it well.
I am so happy it all went well for you...but I will still be lighting that candle!
padumachitta
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Hi
this made me cry and think of allthe pain I have seen while waiting for tests and results. It is the most scarey place in the world, these rooms. You caught it well.
I am so happy it all went well for you...but I will still be lighting that candle!
padumachitta
Comment Written 29-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you my friend:) I haven't gotten an email from you yet though.
Comment from Heather Knight
You have described the atmosphere in the waiting room perfectly. I felt as if I was there myself.
I'm glad to hear everything is okay with your wife.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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You have described the atmosphere in the waiting room perfectly. I felt as if I was there myself.
I'm glad to hear everything is okay with your wife.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you Maria:)
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This reminds me of what it's like to sit in the waiting room of ICU, same scenario, we are all hoping it's not bad news for our loved one. I'm glad your news was good, thank for sharing.
cheers.
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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This reminds me of what it's like to sit in the waiting room of ICU, same scenario, we are all hoping it's not bad news for our loved one. I'm glad your news was good, thank for sharing.
cheers.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you Pearl:)
Comment from rjuselius
i am glad your spouse is recovering dear teresa! i can imagine the worry you had for her. it is never easy to watch a loved one fight for their life and feel so useless at that point.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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i am glad your spouse is recovering dear teresa! i can imagine the worry you had for her. it is never easy to watch a loved one fight for their life and feel so useless at that point.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 29-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you so much Rebekka:)
