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Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, two wonderful miracles....but I like the second one the best...the one in Tel Aviv....and you were so right my friend...it was a wonderful time to write about miracles...I wish more would come true...I soooo wish for peace in the world....beautifully written Michael...love Linda xxoo
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HI Michael, two wonderful miracles....but I like the second one the best...the one in Tel Aviv....and you were so right my friend...it was a wonderful time to write about miracles...I wish more would come true...I soooo wish for peace in the world....beautifully written Michael...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 26-Apr-2017
Comment from frierajac
This is quite entertaining and also a bit miraculous as it is the est I've felt today after a day in the town nearby. Thank you for making it up, it is quite imaginative. The new picture is better as well.
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This is quite entertaining and also a bit miraculous as it is the est I've felt today after a day in the town nearby. Thank you for making it up, it is quite imaginative. The new picture is better as well.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2017
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once again your talent shines through. I enjoyed reading and can always learn something about writing every time I read your posts. Thank you for that.
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Once again your talent shines through. I enjoyed reading and can always learn something about writing every time I read your posts. Thank you for that.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Both acts are really well done, but the second is awesome. If only it would really happen--a true miracle it would be. Thanks for joining us for the potlatch this week, mikey. Your scripts keep getting more awesome, my friend~Debbie
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Both acts are really well done, but the second is awesome. If only it would really happen--a true miracle it would be. Thanks for joining us for the potlatch this week, mikey. Your scripts keep getting more awesome, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Two separate miracles, one so simple for Carl with his Bic but for Gork and his clan amazing.
And your Tel Aviv miracle, wouldn't that be marvellous, the miracle of being able to heal all. Shades of Mother Teresa (that's who came to my mind),
well done.
cheers
valda
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Two separate miracles, one so simple for Carl with his Bic but for Gork and his clan amazing.
And your Tel Aviv miracle, wouldn't that be marvellous, the miracle of being able to heal all. Shades of Mother Teresa (that's who came to my mind),
well done.
cheers
valda
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
Comment from Pantygynt
Ominous that remark about there being no such thing as the future. That could well be true. In the first act your latter day Prometheus is welcomed but what did they do once the gas ran out on the Bic? Or did he tell them about rubbing two dry boy scouts together?
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Ominous that remark about there being no such thing as the future. That could well be true. In the first act your latter day Prometheus is welcomed but what did they do once the gas ran out on the Bic? Or did he tell them about rubbing two dry boy scouts together?
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
Comment from DR DIP
This has got to be the most interesting write i have ever read on Fanstory. Two miracles..the miracle of fire and the miracle of healing. I enjoyed your two 'acts'. Thanks for sharing
dip
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This has got to be the most interesting write i have ever read on Fanstory. Two miracles..the miracle of fire and the miracle of healing. I enjoyed your two 'acts'. Thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written script. In the past to make a fire was a miracle to the ancient folk. Today a miracle will be a healing power that will cure any condition or illness without a healing process that can take months to years.
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A very well-written script. In the past to make a fire was a miracle to the ancient folk. Today a miracle will be a healing power that will cure any condition or illness without a healing process that can take months to years.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
Comment from nordicgirl
Nice to see ypu on a bot of a role, Mr. Cahill. The humor was perfectly didtracting and drew me right in. It made the depth of this kick in late and hard. Wow, how thought inducing this is. Really top notch. NG
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Nice to see ypu on a bot of a role, Mr. Cahill. The humor was perfectly didtracting and drew me right in. It made the depth of this kick in late and hard. Wow, how thought inducing this is. Really top notch. NG
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
Comment from Gloria ....
Haaaaaa, I must say I got a good chuckle out of the guy arriving from the distant future carrying an overnight bag. Was it Louis Vuitton? I'm sure that would cause quite a ruckus around the ring of fireless rocks. Ten to donuts he has matches. Ohhhhhh a Bic lighter and a New York Times, even better.
Whoa, this is philosophically pretty deep with the addition of the woman from the future.
A perfect script that would lend extremely well to performance art.
Ange
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Haaaaaa, I must say I got a good chuckle out of the guy arriving from the distant future carrying an overnight bag. Was it Louis Vuitton? I'm sure that would cause quite a ruckus around the ring of fireless rocks. Ten to donuts he has matches. Ohhhhhh a Bic lighter and a New York Times, even better.
Whoa, this is philosophically pretty deep with the addition of the woman from the future.
A perfect script that would lend extremely well to performance art.
Ange
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
