Homer and Lucy
taking a stroll 7-8-8-911 total reviews
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is such a fun story poem. I'm glad those two dachshunds made your day:)
Good abcb rhyme.
Good luck in the contest.
teresa
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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This is such a fun story poem. I'm glad those two dachshunds made your day:)
Good abcb rhyme.
Good luck in the contest.
teresa
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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thxs for enjoying and for review
lulube
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Lulube, this is a really good, everyday story, well told about a stroll and the things that occurred on the walk. Good abcb rhyme scheme maintained and a good story about the pleasures that can be found in the simple little things if you care to look. Well done. Warm regards Dorothy xxx New home day soon eh?
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Hi Lulube, this is a really good, everyday story, well told about a stroll and the things that occurred on the walk. Good abcb rhyme scheme maintained and a good story about the pleasures that can be found in the simple little things if you care to look. Well done. Warm regards Dorothy xxx New home day soon eh?
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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those types of days are by far my favorite to have. thxs for your comments and review..
Yes May 15 get the keys, I'm so overwhelmed with all of this 18 yrs of clutter to take care of. lol can't seem to let a lot of it go.
lulube
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Lu - your last line was perfect, made me laugh and ponder. Lovely work here, nice to get out and enjoy life in all its glory. Homer and Lucy know how to have a good time. Your poem brings that whole moment to life beautifully.
Good luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
Hugs
m
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Dear Lu - your last line was perfect, made me laugh and ponder. Lovely work here, nice to get out and enjoy life in all its glory. Homer and Lucy know how to have a good time. Your poem brings that whole moment to life beautifully.
Good luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
Hugs
m
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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thxs Mo for your awesome comments in your review they sure were cute to meet on the trail.
lulube
Comment from country ranch writer
Such a beautiful picture and set up for this it is great and they deserve the look from the humans and make their day a happy one for them too. I know it did everyone else
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Such a beautiful picture and set up for this it is great and they deserve the look from the humans and make their day a happy one for them too. I know it did everyone else
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Thxs Barb for your superior rating and for enjoying this poem. Awesome comments also.
lulube
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Got to see my fox tonite he is beautiful!
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that fox is still coming around eh? they know the good humans they can be near.
lulube
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Have you got all settled in?
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No way, I don't get the keys until May 15. My past 18 yrs here is like 50 yrs of pile up. I want to have a huge garage sell there so I'm not throwing out very much and a lot of boxes are needed. last time I move I hope.
lulube
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Oh ! so is it a house or an apartment? You haven't told much about your comings and goings lately. Miss our talks.
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can't find your email, I lost a note book when I went to England with all my emails in it. can you send it again and I'll try and send some pics
lulube
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Barb, did you see your fox the other night? How often does it show up? I bet you talk to it and it knows you now, but still too shy to come really close. an inch at a time, maybe one day there will be one or two little ones tagging behind it and then you can make one trust you and have even a closer chat with it. lol they are a foxy animal.
lulube, I aske d the young girl above me and one over, if she would leave some cat crunchies in a bowl infront of her truck and that I would give her the bowl and crunchies. she said yes. that makes me feel a whole lot better leaving the little thing. Always alone now. the right eye looks pretty bad with infection
lulube
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Awe poor little thing hope it's eye gets better. Foxy comes when I call to get food,still a bit shy but I don't want him to get to depend and on me having to rush t
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Hope you will make new friends there at your new place.Foxy comes when I call him still very shy. Don't want then to get to dependent on me for I never know when we have to rush off for weeks at a time like before.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This tells about two cute dachshunds that made up the best part of poet's day that poet wishes if man would act such carefree and loving to all; I like the sharing of the story in a poem I enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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This tells about two cute dachshunds that made up the best part of poet's day that poet wishes if man would act such carefree and loving to all; I like the sharing of the story in a poem I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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thxs so much for stopping by and for your lovely comments. so glad you enjoyed my little stroll
lulube
Comment from Cindy Warren
Those are two very cute little dogs. How lucky that you took that stroll. I wish people could be as loyal and loving as they are too. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Those are two very cute little dogs. How lucky that you took that stroll. I wish people could be as loyal and loving as they are too. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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thxs for stopping by and for your great comments. I'm glad you agree with how people should be.
lulube
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A friend of mine has a dachshund named Potty. I don't know why she named him that. He dosesn't have a spot on his body. I guess dog owners are just weird. Not like me. My cat Zaphnathpaenea is perfectly named.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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A friend of mine has a dachshund named Potty. I don't know why she named him that. He dosesn't have a spot on his body. I guess dog owners are just weird. Not like me. My cat Zaphnathpaenea is perfectly named.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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lol quite perfect, glad you call it, not me. Zaphny for short? thxs for you time and review
lulube
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your entry for the 'Story in a Poem' contest. It sounds like it was a pleasure meeting these two beautiful dogs. Yes, it would be wonderful if more people had pleasing manners like that of a happy pup.
~patty~
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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thank you for sharing your entry for the 'Story in a Poem' contest. It sounds like it was a pleasure meeting these two beautiful dogs. Yes, it would be wonderful if more people had pleasing manners like that of a happy pup.
~patty~
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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thxs for your great comments and glad you related to my humans comment.
lulube
Comment from MaggieF
Love the picture. What a lovely way to spend a day. You paint a graphic picture of a fun day out with your words. Good rhyming scheme makes poem flow well. The last line says it all. MaggieF
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Love the picture. What a lovely way to spend a day. You paint a graphic picture of a fun day out with your words. Good rhyming scheme makes poem flow well. The last line says it all. MaggieF
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Glad you stopped by and took the stroll with me. thxs for your awesome review
lulube
Comment from SeanFox16
Hi Lulu. Loved your tale of two dogs playing. Indeed if only our lives were so simple. Just goes to show that you can find inspiration for a poem in any situation. They must have been really cute dogs to have left such an impression that you felt inspired to write a poem. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Hi Lulu. Loved your tale of two dogs playing. Indeed if only our lives were so simple. Just goes to show that you can find inspiration for a poem in any situation. They must have been really cute dogs to have left such an impression that you felt inspired to write a poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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I guess I get inspired fairly easy. lol thxs for stopping by and for your great review
lulube
