Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

This love triangle is not going to make love run to smoothly one would think. Fabulous artwork. The forbidden love sending winter chills to all, but the passion has not be chilled, by the looks. Great chapter,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing our horror haiku, you are very kind and we appreciate it.
Gypsy

Comment from SeanFox16

Excellent

Wow. This is a wonderful piece of writing. I absolutely love the picture you chose as it suits the words so perfectly. I love the gothic feel of the whole, words and picture, and it is also very terrifying too. Well done.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017

Thank you for reviewing my poem, my friend, you are very kind.
Gypsy

Comment from nancyrabbrose

Excellent

This is a fitting poem for the genre in which it is intended. You have put it in a setting that enhances the gothic ambiance. Well done. Indeed, it was an "overall sensory experience."

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017

Thank you for reviewing my poem, my friend, you are very kind.
Gypsy

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

An excellent horror haiku that sets a chilling scene.
I'm really enjoying these joint hora haikus you are providing with Dean.
Have a lovely evening

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017

Thank you for reviewing my poem, my friend, you are very kind.
Gypsy

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

I didn't realize you were working on a second stor told with Hora Haiku. I do think you have created something entirely new with these. Best wishes, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2017

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

That is grueling visual imagery. Deep, dark, digusting.... A horror/thriller alright. Good irony with the artwork choice. All good alliteration with forbidden-fruit. Strong concrete satori. Good work.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2017

Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

Gypsy Blue Rose,

Chosen explanations are made very clear and descriptive. Descriptive picture.
Emotional reflections are insightful and impressive. Understandable and thought provoking but especially insightful comments.

There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.

The words you chose worked well.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017

Thank you very much for reading, my friend :)

take care,


Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>

Comment from Mark Schardine

Excellent

I guess Vlad Tepes Dracula himself would not have guessed that such events could take place in Wallachia or Moldavia. Perhaps only an impaling remains.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017

Thank you very much for reading, my friend :)

take care,


Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

Delightfully spooky exchange of haikus that leads to a possible horror story. Great idea and imagination from both of you. I do think you both write this part of life well.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017

Thank you very much for reading, my friend :)

take care,


Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Scary and sexy, secretive and solemn, seductive and forbidden! Love your words which gave me a chill down my spine, a joy to read, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017

Thank you for reading, my friend, you are very kind,

Gypsy