The Scents of Love's Journey
Potlatch Challenge21 total reviews
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Mikey!
I'm glad this was just for fun, as you've about got me in stitches here lol I was chuckling right along until I read 'potted death' lol (Yes, I went back and re-read it and realized it was plotted.) But I'm still laughing at death being potted (and yes, that is so so wrong lol) Your tongue in cheek approach here is excellent.
Although, just an observation, if the relationship has deteriorated to loathing, I'm sure there are sweeter fields to smell ;) Thanks for a fun read on this Nove Otto. I really enjoyed this style!
Kim
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Hi Mikey!
I'm glad this was just for fun, as you've about got me in stitches here lol I was chuckling right along until I read 'potted death' lol (Yes, I went back and re-read it and realized it was plotted.) But I'm still laughing at death being potted (and yes, that is so so wrong lol) Your tongue in cheek approach here is excellent.
Although, just an observation, if the relationship has deteriorated to loathing, I'm sure there are sweeter fields to smell ;) Thanks for a fun read on this Nove Otto. I really enjoyed this style!
Kim
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
Comment from nordicgirl
Twisted beyond all recognition. This is wonderfully you at your most absurd self. I love it. Make sure you let me know what facility you end up in. NG
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Twisted beyond all recognition. This is wonderfully you at your most absurd self. I love it. Make sure you let me know what facility you end up in. NG
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
Comment from DR DIP
Ah the sweaty, amorous fragrant smell of a woman in heat. But a dead woman hmmm the smell changes as the days roll by..then rigamortas(spelling) sets in.
dip
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Ah the sweaty, amorous fragrant smell of a woman in heat. But a dead woman hmmm the smell changes as the days roll by..then rigamortas(spelling) sets in.
dip
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hahaha... you ate her? Not the way she would have like it. This is a horrific poem, Michael. Good job. LOL I like it LOL You are one twisted dud.
I really like your new profile picture. You look very handsome.
Gypsy
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Hahaha... you ate her? Not the way she would have like it. This is a horrific poem, Michael. Good job. LOL I like it LOL You are one twisted dud.
I really like your new profile picture. You look very handsome.
Gypsy
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
Comment from Janilou
I'm glad it's listed as satire, because it is all that! An interesting poem, to say the least. LOL I do not have anything to suggest. What could possibly be said? Funny poem. Nothing to correct!
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I'm glad it's listed as satire, because it is all that! An interesting poem, to say the least. LOL I do not have anything to suggest. What could possibly be said? Funny poem. Nothing to correct!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
Comment from ceramic
The initial attraction may turn into something more, or less, but to liken it to a smell and stench does not seem appropriate even as satire. Is this really some sort of ridicule? The poem has good rhyming and is easy to read.
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The initial attraction may turn into something more, or less, but to liken it to a smell and stench does not seem appropriate even as satire. Is this really some sort of ridicule? The poem has good rhyming and is easy to read.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
Comment from Mastery
LOL. Mister Romance is a tad off on the top if youa sk me. What the hell is he going to do cook her or bury her, Mikey? I will gie you this it is completely different in every way. Good job. Bob
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LOL. Mister Romance is a tad off on the top if youa sk me. What the hell is he going to do cook her or bury her, Mikey? I will gie you this it is completely different in every way. Good job. Bob
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
Comment from Dean Kuch
There's an entire Scientology behind what human scents attract each other to the opposite sex.
Colognes are manufactured, like Jovan's Sex Appeal, for both men and women, for instance, which are said to contain pheromones that will attract the opposite sex.
Most of the findings I've read say a man's natural scent attracts females, and a woman's natural body "aroma" attracts males.
In other words, body odor is the bomb-diggity when it comes to attracting a mate.
Somehow...u-h-h-hhhh... I don't think so.
Most women I've been with think BO is rather offensive.
I would agree.
However, it's just as big a turn-off to me if my lady comes out of the bathroom smelling like she just stepped out of a Vietnamese whorehouse.
So, regarding your poem as well as your author's notes, I'd say a little splash of vanilla is good enough. Just hold the chocolate please.
That stuff is fattening!
~Deano :)
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There's an entire Scientology behind what human scents attract each other to the opposite sex.
Colognes are manufactured, like Jovan's Sex Appeal, for both men and women, for instance, which are said to contain pheromones that will attract the opposite sex.
Most of the findings I've read say a man's natural scent attracts females, and a woman's natural body "aroma" attracts males.
In other words, body odor is the bomb-diggity when it comes to attracting a mate.
Somehow...u-h-h-hhhh... I don't think so.
Most women I've been with think BO is rather offensive.
I would agree.
However, it's just as big a turn-off to me if my lady comes out of the bathroom smelling like she just stepped out of a Vietnamese whorehouse.
So, regarding your poem as well as your author's notes, I'd say a little splash of vanilla is good enough. Just hold the chocolate please.
That stuff is fattening!
~Deano :)
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
Comment from Janet Foor
Yikes! This is a delightfully indelicate Mr. romance. :))
Excellent rhyme and good use of alliteration.
Perfect picture and presentation.
Well done.
Janet
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Yikes! This is a delightfully indelicate Mr. romance. :))
Excellent rhyme and good use of alliteration.
Perfect picture and presentation.
Well done.
Janet
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
Kind of different but good. Creative.
It has a specific rhyme.
Great artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this writing. Is the corpse missing a head?
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
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Kind of different but good. Creative.
It has a specific rhyme.
Great artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this writing. Is the corpse missing a head?
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
