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A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets

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Comment from Teri7
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I love this picture you have painted into my mind as I read this great haiku you penned. You used very good descriptive wording and imagery. Best wishes in the contest! love, Teri

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
    Thank you, Teri, for your kind review and comments for my dandelion haiku. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I appreciate your response.
    Smiles,
    Karyn :-)
Comment from Hitcher
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ha ha, this one made me smile friend, the dreaded dandelion bouquet, turning into that million dollar bouquet because of who has picked and delivered it...classic and oh so cute : )


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 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
    Thank you, Hitch, for your kind review and comments for my dandelion haiku. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I appreciate your response...so glad it made you smile.
    Smiles,
    Karyn :-)
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Yes, the dandelion bouquet is the sweetest gift. A child is so excited to find a flower out in the yard! Pick a bunch and make a bouquet for Mommy - meanwhile, Dad is fuming. The darn things are multiplying!
Thank you for sharing this fun poem. The yellow background with the black lettering sums up the dandelion in its simplest terms,
~patty~

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 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
    Thank you, Patty, for your kind review and comments for my dandelion haiku. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I appreciate your response.
    Smiles,
    Karyn :-)