My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "The Three Crosses"a collection of my poetry
37 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
I like your beautiful poem. I love how it looks, the stanzas look like crosses. I think that writing three would be hard. You did a great job. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
Hello, my friend,
I like your beautiful poem. I love how it looks, the stanzas look like crosses. I think that writing three would be hard. You did a great job. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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thank you, Gypsy. This poetic form seemed like it would be a great fit for my faith poem entry. I appreciate your kind words,
~patty~
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A beautifully penned and presented poem for the spiritual contest, Patty. Writing three of these is a most difficulty project. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~DEbbie
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
A beautifully penned and presented poem for the spiritual contest, Patty. Writing three of these is a most difficulty project. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~DEbbie
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement. I appreciate the well wishes for the contest,
~patty~
Comment from Teri7
This is a great poem you have penned for the faith poetry contest. I truly enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I appreciate you having the scripture with it also. I try to do that, but forget at times! Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
This is a great poem you have penned for the faith poetry contest. I truly enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I appreciate you having the scripture with it also. I try to do that, but forget at times! Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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thank you so much Teri. I'm glad you saw this one. I knew you would enjoy the faith based contest,
~patty~
Comment from c_lucas
To the best of my knowledge, there is no history concerning the two thieves. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
To the best of my knowledge, there is no history concerning the two thieves. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your comments and kind words,
~patty~
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Here faith described, truth stated, crucifixion reminded, one of the two thieves had faith in Jesus and Jesus wiped the thief clean with love; I enjoyed the words in three cross painted in words.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
Here faith described, truth stated, crucifixion reminded, one of the two thieves had faith in Jesus and Jesus wiped the thief clean with love; I enjoyed the words in three cross painted in words.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I so appreciate your kind words,
~patty~
Comment from Poetic Friend
Wow, Patty, this is one of your best.! I love everything about this poem -- the poetic form (the trinet), the shape of the cross, your word choice, and most importantly, the message of faith.
In my opinion, this poem certainly has winning potential. Good luck in the contest.
Have a great weekend.
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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
Wow, Patty, this is one of your best.! I love everything about this poem -- the poetic form (the trinet), the shape of the cross, your word choice, and most importantly, the message of faith.
In my opinion, this poem certainly has winning potential. Good luck in the contest.
Have a great weekend.
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Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you SO much for your kind words and well wishes for the contest. I rarely do well in the contests from FanStory. Fingers crossed!
~patty~
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I have my fingers crossed, too. :)
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
'The Three Crosses' is a great poem on Faith.
The wording is STRONG.
Very impressive.
Great artwork: The image shown of the three crosses is perfect for this poem.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
'The Three Crosses' is a great poem on Faith.
The wording is STRONG.
Very impressive.
Great artwork: The image shown of the three crosses is perfect for this poem.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
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Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Hi Nicole; thank you for stopping by and being the first to review this work. I was so excited when I found this poetic form because I had been planning a poem about the three crosses, and this worked perfectly for me,
~patty~