My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Pretty Pups Make my Day"a collection of my poetry
91 total reviews
Comment from ronnie k
An easy read and enjoyable, I found a smile in my first read and returning I realized there was a few other smiles hanging out inside the metaphor value in this gem.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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An easy read and enjoyable, I found a smile in my first read and returning I realized there was a few other smiles hanging out inside the metaphor value in this gem.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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thank you for stopping by to read my Monchielle poem with my dogs as the subject. This was a challenging poetic form to follow, but I'm very happy with the result - I'm glad you are, too.
~patty~
Comment from jusylee72
My husband and I spend so much of the day admiring and loving our dogs. I so agree with your poem it is a delight to read and so much truth. Enjoy the love of them every day. It is terrible when they have to leave.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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My husband and I spend so much of the day admiring and loving our dogs. I so agree with your poem it is a delight to read and so much truth. Enjoy the love of them every day. It is terrible when they have to leave.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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thank you for stopping by to read my Monchielle poem with my dogs as the subject. This was a challenging poetic form to follow, but I'm very happy with the result - I'm glad you are, too.
~patty~
Comment from Oatmeal
Mustangpatty1029,
The arrangement is formatted very well. Chosen explanations are made very clear and descriptive. Emotional reflections are insightful and impressive. It was a pleasure to read.
I saw no SPAG and no typos. Everything looked in place.
The words you chose worked very well.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Mustangpatty1029,
The arrangement is formatted very well. Chosen explanations are made very clear and descriptive. Emotional reflections are insightful and impressive. It was a pleasure to read.
I saw no SPAG and no typos. Everything looked in place.
The words you chose worked very well.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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thank you for stopping by to read my Monchielle poem with my dogs as the subject. This was a challenging poetic form to follow, but I'm very happy with the result - I'm glad you are, too.
~patty~
Comment from l.raven
HI Patty, LOL...they are so precious....they do give us a reason to get up in the mornings...LOL...I love your little story told...and I love your poem...your picture is priceless...haircuts or not...LOL...very nicely written sweet girl...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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HI Patty, LOL...they are so precious....they do give us a reason to get up in the mornings...LOL...I love your little story told...and I love your poem...your picture is priceless...haircuts or not...LOL...very nicely written sweet girl...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Hi Linda; I'm so glad you were happy with this poem. I just had to try this poetic form. It was a fun write! Thank you for commenting on my furry boys. They have an appointment at the groomers this week,
~patty~
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LOL...smiling...you are so very welcome...xxoo love
Comment from johnwilson
This was so cleverly written and such fun to read. I had never heard of this form of poetry until I read your author notes. Noting the challenge of writing this poem with so many rules, I feel you did an excellent job. The rhyming part is never strained, and at the end I had a smile on my face!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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This was so cleverly written and such fun to read. I had never heard of this form of poetry until I read your author notes. Noting the challenge of writing this poem with so many rules, I feel you did an excellent job. The rhyming part is never strained, and at the end I had a smile on my face!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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thank you so much for your wonderful review. I'm glad the poem brought a smile to your face,
~patty~
Comment from Sis Cat
Your poem makes my day as I review it with a pup in my lap. Your poem celebrates the joys and messes of dogs. Your Monchielle poetry form is well rhymed and structured with a "pretty pups" refrain that hooks me. Thank you for sharing your ode to dogs.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Your poem makes my day as I review it with a pup in my lap. Your poem celebrates the joys and messes of dogs. Your Monchielle poetry form is well rhymed and structured with a "pretty pups" refrain that hooks me. Thank you for sharing your ode to dogs.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Hi Andre - are you still in Mexico? Thank you for reading my poetic ode to the boys. I appreciate your warm review. I've been trying out new poetic forms and I'm having a blast. I'm glad you liked this one,
~patty~
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No, Patty, I arrived home two days ago. I got a couple of Mexican poems I am working on finishing. Stay turned. Thanks for sharing your puppy poem.
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Welcome back to the states. I look forward to reading your new works, ~p~
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a form with which I am totally unfamiliar. It works well for a light-hearted dedication such as this. Strange how we forgive them whatever evil they perpetrate. The make great friends and their loyalty is untrammelled.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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This is a form with which I am totally unfamiliar. It works well for a light-hearted dedication such as this. Strange how we forgive them whatever evil they perpetrate. The make great friends and their loyalty is untrammelled.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Hi Jim; Sandra du Plessis posted a poem using this format the other day, and I tried it from the author's notes she provided. I am having a great time trying out new forms of poetry. It keeps my mind sharp! Thank you for your warm words,
~patty~
Comment from JDRBAR
As a dog lover, I can thoroughly relate with each and every word. Put together as you've done makes it a great read and entertaining as well. However, I wasn't as lucky as you with your very last line. LOL
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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As a dog lover, I can thoroughly relate with each and every word. Put together as you've done makes it a great read and entertaining as well. However, I wasn't as lucky as you with your very last line. LOL
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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LOL! You aren't the only one that has shared that the dog ate your shoes. The only thing we lose to chewing is the occasional sock. Howie believes that if its on the ground for too long - its fair game. Thank you for your warm review,
~patty~
Comment from judiverse
Pretty pups can certainly make one's day. They've been known to cheer up people in a nursing home and make sick children smile. Great job with this type of poem, and you have joyful images of the furry faces and cold noses and the way they play. I like your use of the word "ruse." Clever last line. Yours are well-trained if they don't eat shoes. You do mention a few other problems the little darlings can create. judi
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Pretty pups can certainly make one's day. They've been known to cheer up people in a nursing home and make sick children smile. Great job with this type of poem, and you have joyful images of the furry faces and cold noses and the way they play. I like your use of the word "ruse." Clever last line. Yours are well-trained if they don't eat shoes. You do mention a few other problems the little darlings can create. judi
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Hi judi; Yes, my dogs certainly make the best of my days. They keep me entertained and will even give me hugs! I appreciate your warm review and kind words.
~patty~
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You're very welcome. Enjoy your weekend with your furry friends. judi
Comment from mbroyles2
You are the lucky one.
My dog destroyed several pairs of shoes when he was a puppy.
He's moved on to plastic pop bottles.
Lovely poem about your pups.
Great descriptions and imagery.
They are absolutely adorable.
A wonderful muse to have.
Michael
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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You are the lucky one.
My dog destroyed several pairs of shoes when he was a puppy.
He's moved on to plastic pop bottles.
Lovely poem about your pups.
Great descriptions and imagery.
They are absolutely adorable.
A wonderful muse to have.
Michael
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Hi Michael; I AM lucky that the dogs aren't chewers. The only thing we've lost is the occasional sock that drops on the floor for too long. Howie seems to think that any sock on the floor is his. He puts his paw on one end and uses his teeth on the other. It isn't too long before the sock is useless. Yes, the boys make wonderful muses.
~patty~
