Haiku (a virgin full moon)
A 5-7-5 poem3 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Your 5-7-5 is quite evocative and parallels the picture perfectly. I enjoyed your simile and unexpected final image! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Your 5-7-5 is quite evocative and parallels the picture perfectly. I enjoyed your simile and unexpected final image! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Hi Joan, thank you my friend.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
lol, That was great my friend, I love, very clever, never would of thought of it, skinny dipping heh-heh a virgin full moon. I got to hand it to you for being original my friend.This will do great in the contest,you don' even need luck on this one.
~Kerry~
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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lol, That was great my friend, I love, very clever, never would of thought of it, skinny dipping heh-heh a virgin full moon. I got to hand it to you for being original my friend.This will do great in the contest,you don' even need luck on this one.
~Kerry~
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Kerry my friend, very kind of you to visit; appreciate your time and glad you like the write, I thank you; enjoy the weekend.
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Your welcome, and you have a good weekend as well
Comment from kahpot
What a great vision you put in my mind of younger years, the closer you get the girl to the water? my vision and with this artwork gave excellent vision ( to me very well done)****kahpot
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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What a great vision you put in my mind of younger years, the closer you get the girl to the water? my vision and with this artwork gave excellent vision ( to me very well done)****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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kahpot my friend, so nice of you to visit and I am pleased to read your wonderful review; thank you and enjoy the weekend.
