Life's love
The journey of love and life14 total reviews
Comment from Laurie Clayton
Good Morning,
Normally I'd say this is a lovely start to my day, but as I was up most of the night, technically, it must be lunch time!
And I can't think of a better way to be. All our experiences, good or bad, are what shapes us into who we are, you get the message across clearly.
Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Good Morning,
Normally I'd say this is a lovely start to my day, but as I was up most of the night, technically, it must be lunch time!
And I can't think of a better way to be. All our experiences, good or bad, are what shapes us into who we are, you get the message across clearly.
Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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It's actually 5;30 pm on Friday in Sydney Laurie Time differences between united states and australia one day ahead but 8 hrs behind
Thanks for the great review
dip
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I'm in the UK... it's 08:30 just now. Feels like I've pulled an all nighter ...and I'm definitely getting too old for that malarkey!
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Oh ok I thought you might have been in America
dip
Comment from Thal1959
I'll pitch in with a six for this one, D. It reads smooth in rhymes and meter. Makes good sense and sentiments from someone who has had a good life. And now, for reminding everyone of the good life you've had... "May a camel with a weak bladder relieve itself over your bowl of corn flakes!"
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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I'll pitch in with a six for this one, D. It reads smooth in rhymes and meter. Makes good sense and sentiments from someone who has had a good life. And now, for reminding everyone of the good life you've had... "May a camel with a weak bladder relieve itself over your bowl of corn flakes!"
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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hmmm sounds nice! Cornflakes with camel piss! it supposed to be good for you lol
Thanks for the positive review and the great 6 Thal really appreciate that.
dip
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You'd be surprised, D. The Arabs wash their hands and faces, and will even drink camel urine.
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Yes I agree . I believe that we all ask that question in life, about life, more than one or twice. "If I could do it all again I would do it all so differently!" I know that i have said it, again and again but I meant it though.
This poem is actually deserving six stars but I don't have six. This poem should be framed.
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Yes I agree . I believe that we all ask that question in life, about life, more than one or twice. "If I could do it all again I would do it all so differently!" I know that i have said it, again and again but I meant it though.
This poem is actually deserving six stars but I don't have six. This poem should be framed.
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Wow thanks Tier. I always appreciate your input
dip
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Hey DIP did you get a chance to read my latest re-post, "Little Girls Destiny?" When You get a chance check it out and let me know what you think
Comment from Sis Cat
Dip, I love that ending, "I've loved my life! I'm no trendsetter." It is about being satisfied with the life you are living now. This is a poem about an elderly man looking back upon a long life with regret. It is about seizing the moment now and not looking back with regret.
Only suggesting is to decrease the punctuation in this section:
Nah,I've loved my life! I'm no trendsetter.
Thank you for sharing another fine poem.
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Dip, I love that ending, "I've loved my life! I'm no trendsetter." It is about being satisfied with the life you are living now. This is a poem about an elderly man looking back upon a long life with regret. It is about seizing the moment now and not looking back with regret.
Only suggesting is to decrease the punctuation in this section:
Nah,I've loved my life! I'm no trendsetter.
Thank you for sharing another fine poem.
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Thanks as always Sis and yes I agree too many exclamation marks lol
glad you liked it
dip
