Bye
Leaving, going, gone.37 total reviews
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
'Bye' is a good poem.
It consists of three lines.
Each line has a syllable count: 1-6-1
All three lines rhyme.
Great artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this poem.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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'Bye' is a good poem.
It consists of three lines.
Each line has a syllable count: 1-6-1
All three lines rhyme.
Great artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this poem.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for reading and then taking the time to review. I appreciate your kind thoughts. And of course your good wishes.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a terrific rhyming 1-6-1 contest entry. the picture went perfect with it, telling the whole story. Good luck to you. ~Kerry~
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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This is a terrific rhyming 1-6-1 contest entry. the picture went perfect with it, telling the whole story. Good luck to you. ~Kerry~
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for reading and then taking the time to review. I appreciate your kind thoughts. And of course your good wishes.
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Your welcome
Comment from rjuselius
it is always heart wrenching when orphan children are left behind. when they might just rock back and forth due to the traumas they have encountered and the love that has beeen stolen from them.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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it is always heart wrenching when orphan children are left behind. when they might just rock back and forth due to the traumas they have encountered and the love that has beeen stolen from them.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for reading and then taking the time to review. I appreciate your kind thoughts. And of course your good wishes.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Where are we going?
Should I pack light, or are we gonna be there awhile?
Is there coffee where we're goin' because I can't and won't survive without it.
Do those kids gotta come with us?
We won't get any work done if they do.
What kind of work are we doin' anyhow?
Nicely rhymed 1-6-1....
~Dean
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Where are we going?
Should I pack light, or are we gonna be there awhile?
Is there coffee where we're goin' because I can't and won't survive without it.
Do those kids gotta come with us?
We won't get any work done if they do.
What kind of work are we doin' anyhow?
Nicely rhymed 1-6-1....
~Dean
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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MMMM, you pick the place, definitely pack for a while, oh yes indeed- lots and lots of coffee, well they really should come along, I think work would get done without a problem., oh writing of course. Thanks Dean for reading and reviewing.
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Okay, let's go to Mumbai.
I'll bring the coffee (Seattle's Best, not that Starbuck's crap!), you keep the kids on your side of the room, and you are very welcome. :)
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your 1-6-1 poem "Bye" You kept to all the rules and chose a very appropriate photo., especially as the world is in such a bad state.
Best of luck in the contest.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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I enjoyed reading your 1-6-1 poem "Bye" You kept to all the rules and chose a very appropriate photo., especially as the world is in such a bad state.
Best of luck in the contest.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for reading and then taking the time to review. I appreciate your kind thoughts. And of course for your good wishes.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This looks like the makings of a sad story. I like the fact that you left me to draw my own conclusions. it could be just a short separation or far longer.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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This looks like the makings of a sad story. I like the fact that you left me to draw my own conclusions. it could be just a short separation or far longer.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for reading and then taking the time to review. I appreciate your kind thoughts.
Comment from Irish Rain
Such a hard poem to write in so little syllables...I am assuming an illegal immigrant? Heartbreaking...I am totally in favor of the wall...to border our country...but totally against tearing apart families that are already here. Make them legal. This shouldn't happen. Good luck, blessings...
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Such a hard poem to write in so little syllables...I am assuming an illegal immigrant? Heartbreaking...I am totally in favor of the wall...to border our country...but totally against tearing apart families that are already here. Make them legal. This shouldn't happen. Good luck, blessings...
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for reading and then taking the time to review. I appreciate your kind thoughts.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Parting is such sweet sorrow comes to mind, sad goodbyes here,I wish you luck with the contest, few words but tears fall whenever I say goodbye, best wishes Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Parting is such sweet sorrow comes to mind, sad goodbyes here,I wish you luck with the contest, few words but tears fall whenever I say goodbye, best wishes Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for reading and then taking the time to review. I appreciate your kind thoughts. And of course your good wishes.
Comment from kahpot
Wonderful, in this picture combined with you words saying goodbye has mixed emotions, what choice of image this gives the reader good luck in your competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Wonderful, in this picture combined with you words saying goodbye has mixed emotions, what choice of image this gives the reader good luck in your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for reading and then taking the time to review. I appreciate your kind thoughts. And of course your good wishes.
Comment from gene roush
You wrote a story with seven words. Hemingway's famous story took six, but his didn't rhyme. Poetic ability amazes me.
"Why?" Sets the tone. "Bye!" completes it.
Nice job.
Thanks for sharing
Gene
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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You wrote a story with seven words. Hemingway's famous story took six, but his didn't rhyme. Poetic ability amazes me.
"Why?" Sets the tone. "Bye!" completes it.
Nice job.
Thanks for sharing
Gene
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review and for your kind comments.
