With Him Forevermore
Thoughts as I am approaching 7916 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Patricia, This is a very well written poem and I can surely identify with your feelings. You used very good wording and very good imagery with the picture. I enjoyed it. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Patricia, This is a very well written poem and I can surely identify with your feelings. You used very good wording and very good imagery with the picture. I enjoyed it. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Thanks teri, for the nice review.
Patricia Lawrence
Comment from Joan E.
I liked the anticipatory zeal in your artwork! Here's to being one year short of the big 80! Although our body is falling apart, I admired your positive attitude. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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I liked the anticipatory zeal in your artwork! Here's to being one year short of the big 80! Although our body is falling apart, I admired your positive attitude. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the kind review, Joan.
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your poem "With Him Forevermore". You rhymed it well and you told a lovely story of faith and His words in your picture.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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I enjoyed reading your poem "With Him Forevermore". You rhymed it well and you told a lovely story of faith and His words in your picture.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the great review, Marybell.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Caressa_08
Oh, Patricia, such great poetry & your body might be getting weak it seems from your poem, your talent of writing still hasn't deteriorated but has kept many of us here enthralled...And, hope with the help of Jesus, He may heal you in so many ways.
Caressa_08
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Oh, Patricia, such great poetry & your body might be getting weak it seems from your poem, your talent of writing still hasn't deteriorated but has kept many of us here enthralled...And, hope with the help of Jesus, He may heal you in so many ways.
Caressa_08
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the great review, Caressa. And thanks for the six.
Comment from MelB
Very nice rhyme and flow, Patricia. As we get older, our bodies do break down. It will be awesome when we get those new bodies in heaven! Great job with this poem.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Very nice rhyme and flow, Patricia. As we get older, our bodies do break down. It will be awesome when we get those new bodies in heaven! Great job with this poem.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Melissa.
Comment from l.raven
HI Patricia, I know what you are saying...
as I get older I feel it more...but I know God is here with me...
He will take me in the right direction...
very nicely written my sweet friend...I love your poem
and a stunning picture...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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HI Patricia, I know what you are saying...
as I get older I feel it more...but I know God is here with me...
He will take me in the right direction...
very nicely written my sweet friend...I love your poem
and a stunning picture...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Linda.
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you are so very welome...xxoo love
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend your excitement and the pain you go through can be felt in your poem but with God by your side, you have so much love and support well-done regards Jill
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Yes my friend your excitement and the pain you go through can be felt in your poem but with God by your side, you have so much love and support well-done regards Jill
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Jill.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A lovely poem, my friend, and I think the more we lose the more riches we find we truly have. We have much to be thankful despite our challenges~Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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A lovely poem, my friend, and I think the more we lose the more riches we find we truly have. We have much to be thankful despite our challenges~Debbie
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Debbie.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
No more pain, no more asking for help, no more struggling to get out of a chair, no more squinting to see, Oh yes, bring it on. this is perfect
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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No more pain, no more asking for help, no more struggling to get out of a chair, no more squinting to see, Oh yes, bring it on. this is perfect
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Barb.
Comment from lyenochka
Patricia, this is such a beautiful poem and beautiful attitude. I like how you use each part of physical being and change the focus to the Lord. I'm hoping to have such an attitude as I my earthly tent wears down. Blessings.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Patricia, this is such a beautiful poem and beautiful attitude. I like how you use each part of physical being and change the focus to the Lord. I'm hoping to have such an attitude as I my earthly tent wears down. Blessings.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the nice review. One thing about being ill and in a lot of pain, you do have a lot of time to reflect on what the future may hold.
