2018 Bernie and Howie Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "The Ball"...stories and poems about the boys
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Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a very cute Haiku Patty. Is that their treat ball you wrote about once lol.
four little black eyes twinkle, love that line. Happy Easter. ~Kerry~
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2017
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This is a very cute Haiku Patty. Is that their treat ball you wrote about once lol.
four little black eyes twinkle, love that line. Happy Easter. ~Kerry~
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Comment Written 16-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2017
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thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I so appreciate your comments on this piece. Your words of encouragement mean a great deal to me. Yup - that's Howie's snack ball - hubby had to hold them while I snapped the picture - LOL!
~patty~😀
Comment from tfawcus
Apart from any technical aspects of the Haiku form, as explained in your author notes, this encapsulates a moment of pure joy and hilarity as the puppies play. A delightful little poem!
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Apart from any technical aspects of the Haiku form, as explained in your author notes, this encapsulates a moment of pure joy and hilarity as the puppies play. A delightful little poem!
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Comment Written 16-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2017
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thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I so appreciate your comments on this piece. Your words of encouragement mean a great deal to me,
~patty~😀
