2017 Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Clouds"A collection of my poems
18 total reviews
Comment from bookishfabler
I do not know why, but your poems are the only ones that are all the way to my right on the screen.ONe time it wasn't even there. This was very lovely. I felt serenity.
hugs Heidi
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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I do not know why, but your poems are the only ones that are all the way to my right on the screen.ONe time it wasn't even there. This was very lovely. I felt serenity.
hugs Heidi
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Thank you very much for reading, my friend :) I don't know why....that is weird. You may try the old fanstory or are you reading in old fanstory? That could be why. I use advance editor.
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>
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Yeah, I prefer Old Fanstory. I'm used to it.
Comment from Douglas Paul
I really like this. It is very romantic and paints a great picture with the imagery you use. It flows well with good meter. So you can write rhymed poetry after all LOL
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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I really like this. It is very romantic and paints a great picture with the imagery you use. It flows well with good meter. So you can write rhymed poetry after all LOL
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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LOL I am terrible at writing rhymed poems but I am not afraid to meet a challenge. Thank you, my friend.
Gypsy Sensei
Comment from Lu Saluna
This is a very sweet rhyming poem. I enjoy it when you do a rhymed poem. It is fun to read something different. I always enjoy your writing.
Great job!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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This is a very sweet rhyming poem. I enjoy it when you do a rhymed poem. It is fun to read something different. I always enjoy your writing.
Great job!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you very much, sweetie pie, I appreciate it. Thank you for the six stars... they are so pretty. :)
MariVal
Comment from l.raven
OH Gypsy, this is just beautiful...I am sure Dr.Dip will love this....I would have not doubt you would meet the challenge...I love poem...would love to lay in those fields as well...sigh....so beautiful sweet angel...I love your picture...love to ya Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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OH Gypsy, this is just beautiful...I am sure Dr.Dip will love this....I would have not doubt you would meet the challenge...I love poem...would love to lay in those fields as well...sigh....so beautiful sweet angel...I love your picture...love to ya Linda xxoo
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you, honey, luv ya too :)
Gypsy hugs
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your sooooo welcome...I hope all is going well for you...xxoo love
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I'm okay... adjusting to my new home... I miss my old apartment.
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I'm so sorry...I hate moving for any reason...take care...love xxoo
Comment from Grasshopper2
Lady Blue,
My favorite is
"You'll lay your jacket o'er morning dew,"
Wonderful image. I think you did the dare justice but I prefer your haiku, tanka, rengas, and those few. I enjoyed reading you.
Michael
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Lady Blue,
My favorite is
"You'll lay your jacket o'er morning dew,"
Wonderful image. I think you did the dare justice but I prefer your haiku, tanka, rengas, and those few. I enjoyed reading you.
Michael
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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I prefer my haiku too :) Thank you for giving it a go.
Gypsy Sensei
Comment from Ulla
Hola Gitana, but this is beautiful. I wish I could write anything like this. It's wonderful. I also wish I could express such imagery with so wonderful words. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Hola Gitana, but this is beautiful. I wish I could write anything like this. It's wonderful. I also wish I could express such imagery with so wonderful words. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Gracias guapa! Besitos y abrazos.
Gypsy
Comment from judiverse
It's fun to imagine what the clouds look like. It's especially fun if you're in an airplane and feel like you can touch them. I love the elephants in the bright blue socks. Very imaginative. It's a great idea to step out of your usual style and try something different. You did a great job, so I'm glad you took the challenge. judi
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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It's fun to imagine what the clouds look like. It's especially fun if you're in an airplane and feel like you can touch them. I love the elephants in the bright blue socks. Very imaginative. It's a great idea to step out of your usual style and try something different. You did a great job, so I'm glad you took the challenge. judi
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend, you are very kind.
Gypsy Sensei
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You're quite welcome. judi
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for stretching your wings into a rhymed poem about romantic and fanciful moments. Your "elephants in bright blue socks" are memorable. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Thank you for stretching your wings into a rhymed poem about romantic and fanciful moments. Your "elephants in bright blue socks" are memorable. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend, you are very kind.
Gypsy Sensei
Comment from Ric Myworld
Oh, those beautiful fields of blue, and I would never of had any doubt that you could write rhyming poems, too. And another fine job, as always. I did learn that those pesky purple weeds in my yard were not African violets as I was told. They were a combination of Deadnettle and Henbit. Of course, I wouldn't bet on that either.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Oh, those beautiful fields of blue, and I would never of had any doubt that you could write rhyming poems, too. And another fine job, as always. I did learn that those pesky purple weeds in my yard were not African violets as I was told. They were a combination of Deadnettle and Henbit. Of course, I wouldn't bet on that either.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend, you are very kind. Yeah, I didn't think African violet were weeds... they are very hard to grow and they are beautiful.
Gypsy Sensei
Comment from Rasmine
This is so sweet. I love the rhyming, and the sentimental thought and romantic setting. I love that he takes off his coat to lay over the ground. It would be so wonderful to have a boyfriend that did that. I seem to meet only jerks, though.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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This is so sweet. I love the rhyming, and the sentimental thought and romantic setting. I love that he takes off his coat to lay over the ground. It would be so wonderful to have a boyfriend that did that. I seem to meet only jerks, though.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend, you are very kind. I understand how you feel.
Gypsy Sensei
